List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a complete sentence and add a reason or detail to make your answer more natural and effective. For example, explain why you make a list when you shop.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

Suggestion: Use complete sentences and linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Also, explain how making a list helps you with your work.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me arrange my time efficiently and save time overall.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question by explaining reasons why some people dislike making lists, using clear and complete sentences.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things without writing them down.

Suggestion: Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and linking words. Explain your preference clearly and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh'.

Example: I prefer to make lists on paper because I often forget to check my phone, but when the list is on paper in front of me, I remember to use it every day.

× Yeah, I make.

✓ Yeah, I make a list.

The original sentence lacks an object after the verb 'make', causing a sentence structure error. The verb 'make' requires an object to complete the meaning. Adding 'a list' clarifies the action and completes the sentence.

× Yeah, I make a list for my work and it's work.

✓ Yeah, I make a list for my work and it works.

The phrase 'it's work' is incorrect here. The intended meaning is that the list is effective or functions well, so the correct verb form is 'works' (third person singular present tense). Also, 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is', which does not fit the context.

× Usually I do it. To arrange my time and save it.

✓ Usually, I do it to arrange my time and save it.

The second sentence 'To arrange my time and save it.' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Combining it with the previous sentence forms a complete sentence. Also, adding a comma after 'Usually' improves readability.

× To arrange their time and to set A and set the time.

✓ To arrange their time and to set priorities and schedule their time.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear, especially the phrase 'set A and set the time'. Clarifying the intended meaning by specifying 'set priorities and schedule their time' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× Really. I make it on a paper.

✓ Really, I make it on paper.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is an uncountable noun and does not require an article. The correct prepositional phrase is 'on paper'. Also, replacing the period with a comma improves sentence flow.

× Uh, because my phone sometimes I don't open and I don't check it.

✓ Uh, sometimes I don't open my phone and I don't check it.

The original sentence has incorrect word order. The subject 'I' should come before the verb 'don't open'. Rearranging the sentence to 'sometimes I don't open my phone' corrects the structure.

× So I see if when it is on a paper in front of my face every day, I can not take that.

✓ So I see that when it is on paper in front of my face every day, I cannot ignore it.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'I can not take that' is unclear; likely the intended meaning is 'I cannot ignore it' or 'I cannot avoid it'. Also, 'on a paper' should be 'on paper' as explained earlier. Rephrasing improves clarity and correctness.