List— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Are usually make a list when I shop. Because I would like to categorise the thing I would like to. Buy into 3 categories. First for the first thing like which for fruits, second is for my personal use and that is for a snack.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
I do make a list and it really works because. I think I can prioritize my work and. The list help me too. Do things successfully.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
I think because some people are straightforward. Type. But I would like to suggest them to making a list because it is a helpful and benefit for their work and. You they can manage their life better with the list.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer making a list on phone because I carry my phone with me everywhere. So this is a. Very. Opportunity to forget the list because. It is on my phone and I can send them to other people to know my know my.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น ใช้ 'because' อย่างถูกต้อง และจัดลำดับความคิดให้ชัดเจนมากขึ้น
Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me organize items into three categories: fruits, personal use products, and snacks.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: ควรเชื่อมประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมอย่างเหมาะสม เช่น 'because' และ 'so' เพื่อแสดงเหตุผลและผลลัพธ์อย่างชัดเจน
Example: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks, so I can complete them successfully.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'straightforward type' ควรอธิบายให้ชัดเจน และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความสมูท
Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous, but I suggest making lists because they help manage work and life more effectively.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และชัดเจน รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล
Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I won't forget the list, and I can easily share it with others.
Grammar
× Are usually make a list when I shop.
✓ I usually make a list when I shop.
The original sentence lacks a subject and uses 'Are' incorrectly. The correct subject 'I' should be used with the adverb 'usually' before the verb 'make' to form a proper present tense sentence.
× Because I would like to categorise the thing I would like to. Buy into 3 categories.
✓ Because I would like to categorise the things I want to buy into 3 categories.
The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect word order. 'Would like to' is repeated unnecessarily, and 'thing' should be plural 'things'. The verb 'buy' should be connected properly to the sentence.
× First for the first thing like which for fruits, second is for my personal use and that is for a snack.
✓ First is for things like fruits, second is for my personal use, and third is for snacks.
The sentence has singular/plural inconsistency and unclear structure. 'Thing' should be plural 'things', and the list should be clearly enumerated with consistent plural forms.
× I do make a list and it really works because. I think I can prioritize my work and. The list help me too. Do things successfully.
✓ I do make a list and it really works because I think I can prioritize my work, and the list helps me to do things successfully.
The original sentences are fragmented and have punctuation errors. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'list'. The sentence should be combined properly for clarity.
× I think because some people are straightforward. Type.
✓ I think it's because some people are straightforward types.
The phrase 'straightforward type' is incomplete and lacks a linking verb. 'It's because' clarifies the reason, and 'types' should be plural to match 'some people'.
× But I would like to suggest them to making a list because it is a helpful and benefit for their work and.
✓ But I would like to suggest that they make a list because it is helpful and beneficial for their work.
The phrase 'suggest them to making' is incorrect; the correct form is 'suggest that they make'. Also, 'a helpful and benefit' is incorrect; it should be 'helpful and beneficial'.
× You they can manage their life better with the list.
✓ They can manage their life better with the list.
The pronouns 'You they' are redundant and incorrect. Only 'They' is needed as the subject of the sentence.
× I prefer making a list on phone because I carry my phone with me everywhere.
✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me everywhere.
The preposition 'on' requires a determiner before 'phone'. 'On my phone' is the correct phrase.
× So this is a. Very. Opportunity to forget the list because.
✓ So this is a very good opportunity to avoid forgetting the list because
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Very opportunity' is incorrect; it should be 'very good opportunity'. Also, 'to forget the list' is likely intended as 'to avoid forgetting the list'.
× It is on my phone and I can send them to other people to know my know my.
✓ It is on my phone and I can send it to other people so they know my list.
The sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('know my know my'). 'Them' should be 'it' referring to the list, and the sentence should clarify the purpose of sending the list.
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