List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณควรมีความชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ หลีกเลี่ยงการพูดติดขัดและคำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'mail' ควรเป็น 'list' และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so'.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go because I usually forget what I need. Therefore, I prefer to keep the list on my phone for convenience.

Suggestion: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'make leads' ควรเป็น 'make lists' และควรใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค เช่น 'because' และ 'so' นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่ชัดเจนและพูดให้ครบประโยคเพื่อความเข้าใจที่ดีขึ้น.

Example: Yes, I always make a list before doing any work because I tend to forget tasks. So, making a list helps me remember what I need to do.

Suggestion: คำตอบนี้ไม่ชัดเจนและมีคำพูดที่ผิดพลาดมาก ควรตอบตรงคำถามและอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน ใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'some people may find it boring or time-consuming to make lists'.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or think it takes too much time. They prefer to remember tasks without writing them down.

Suggestion: คำตอบควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'mail' ควรเป็น 'list' และ 'convertible' ควรเป็น 'convenient' รวมถึงใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างชัดเจน เช่น 'because I can access it anywhere'.

Example: I prefer to make my list on my phone because it is convenient. I can check what I need to do anytime and anywhere.

× I always to make please.

✓ I always make a list.

The phrase 'I always to make please' is incorrect because 'to make' is an infinitive used improperly here and 'please' is misplaced. The correct form is 'I always make a list.' which uses the base verb 'make' correctly after 'always'.

× Before I go shopping because I. Usually forget.

✓ Before I go shopping because I usually forget.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. 'Because I.' is incomplete and should be connected to the following clause without a period. The corrected sentence is 'Before I go shopping because I usually forget.'

× About the necessary when, what should I do?

✓ About what is necessary, what should I do?

The phrase 'About the necessary when' is unclear and incorrectly structured. It should be 'About what is necessary' to correctly refer to necessary items or tasks.

× So I prefer mail is on my phone.

✓ So I prefer to have my list on my phone.

The sentence 'So I prefer mail is on my phone.' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning is better expressed as 'So I prefer to have my list on my phone.'

× Personally, I always make list before I do something.

✓ Personally, I always make a list before I do something.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a' before it: 'make a list'.

× Such ads iOS make leads when before I do at Simon of school because I always forget it.

✓ For example, I make lists before I do assignments at school because I always forget them.

The original sentence is incoherent and contains many errors. It is corrected to a clear sentence that fits the context: 'For example, I make lists before I do assignments at school because I always forget them.'

× So I think it helped to remind what should I do.

✓ So I think it helps to remind me what I should do.

The pronoun 'it' refers to the list, which helps in the present, so 'helped' should be 'helps'. Also, 'what should I do' should be 'what I should do' in indirect speech, and 'remind' should be followed by 'me'.

× For me, I think it helped to organize off. Dim life and it helped to save time an it's when to make make lids adding it help to to what should they do it that day.

✓ For me, I think it helps to organize my life and save time. When I make lists, it helps me know what I should do that day.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases. 'Organize off. Dim life' is incorrect; it should be 'organize my life'. 'Make make lids' is a typo for 'make lists'. The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct.

× Personally, I prefer mail is on my phone because I think it's a convertible.

✓ Personally, I prefer my list on my phone because I think it's convenient.

'Mail is on my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'my list on my phone'. 'Convertible' is a wrong word here; the correct adjective is 'convenient'.

× I can know what should I do everywhere an I think it's a. You see, for my life.

✓ I can know what I should do everywhere, and I think it's useful for my life.

The sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'What should I do' should be 'what I should do' in indirect speech. 'It's a. You see' is incomplete and unclear. The corrected sentence is coherent and grammatically correct.