List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên nói "an application on my phone called To Do List" thay vì "call To Do List an". Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý, tránh lặp từ và câu quá dài.

Example: Sometimes I make a list using an application on my phone called To Do List. I usually use this checklist when I go to the supermarket. However, when I shop spontaneously, especially if I crave sweet things, I just go with the flow without a checklist.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn, ví dụ như "because" hoặc "since" để giải thích lý do. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ lặp lại như "list" quá nhiều lần trong câu.

Example: Absolutely, I always make a list for my work and categorize tasks by their urgency. This method works well because I prioritize tasks based on deadlines, which helps me stay organized and efficient.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách nối câu. Ví dụ, tránh ngắt quãng câu không cần thiết như "because." và "list.". Bạn nên dùng liên từ để nối các ý và sửa lỗi chính tả như "restrict" thay vì "restrick".

Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted and believe it limits their flexibility and freedom to complete tasks as they wish. However, I believe this habit can negatively affect their personal life.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "no doubt everything" nên là "write down everything". Ngoài ra, câu cuối nên dùng liên từ để kết nối ý, tránh câu ngắn rời rạc.

Example: I consider myself a very traditional person, so I usually write down everything on a piece of paper. That said, I keep a small and compact notebook with me wherever I go to make notes and keep my To Do List organized.

× I have an application on my phone call To Do List an.

✓ I have an application on my phone called To Do List.

The preposition 'call' is incorrectly used here; the correct past participle form 'called' should be used to describe the application. The phrase 'call To Do List an' is incorrect; it should be 'called To Do List'. This is a common mistake when trying to use the verb 'call' as an adjective.

× I usually have this checklist when I go to supermarket, but when I shop spontaneously, especially when I have a craving for some sweet things, I just go with the flow and have no checklist.

✓ I usually have this checklist when I go to the supermarket, but when I shop spontaneously, especially when I have a craving for some sweet things, I just go with the flow and have no checklist.

The noun 'supermarket' is countable and singular, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it. Omitting 'the' before singular countable nouns is a common error.

× I think certain people don't like making list because.

✓ I think certain people don't like making lists because.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. When talking about the activity in general, the plural form is appropriate.

× They think that list. Restrick them and they don't have the flexibility and the freedom to do the tasks the way that they like.

✓ They think that lists restrict them and they don't have the flexibility and the freedom to do the tasks the way that they like.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains a misspelling 'Restrick' instead of 'restrict'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. The corrected sentence combines the fragments and corrects the spelling and plural form.

× I consider myself as a very traditional person, so I usually no doubt everything on a piece of paper.

✓ I consider myself a very traditional person, so I usually write everything on a piece of paper without a doubt.

The phrase 'consider myself as' is incorrect; 'consider myself' is correct without 'as'. Also, 'no doubt everything' is unclear and likely a misuse; it should be 'write everything without a doubt'. The original sentence lacks clarity and proper verb usage.

× That said, I will make notes an A To Do List on my notebook.

✓ That said, I will make notes and a To Do List in my notebook.

The phrase 'make notes an A To Do List' is incorrect; it should be 'make notes and a To Do List'. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect for 'notebook'; 'in' is the correct preposition when referring to writing inside a notebook.