ListPart 1 Report

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Part 1

Examiner

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidate

Yes I do make a list when I go to shopping 'cause it will clearly reminds me of what I'm going to buy an also avoid me of over spending too much money.

Examiner

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidate

Actually I do make this when I work, but it doesn't really help 'cause there is always a change between a suddenly change so. It's more like predictive, not like actual.

Examiner

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidate

Maybe some people knows that even though you make a less, you might actually not going to complete it or you might feel stressful of. Doing them.

Examiner

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidate

Actually, I will prefer like a list on paper more than on my phone 'cause on my phone I won't, maybe I will forget or I won't even open my note, but on paper I can see every like every time, any time I remind me more quickly.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 6.0Fluency & Coherence: 6.0Pronunciation: 6.0Grammar: 5.5Lexical Resource: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Score: 65.0

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但语法和用词不够准确,且句子结构较为简单。建议注意动词形式和冠词的使用,避免语法错误,同时可以用更自然的表达方式。

Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from spending too much money.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Score: 50.0

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和连词,使表达更连贯自然。

Example: Yes, I make lists for work, but they don't always help because plans often change unexpectedly. So, the lists are more like predictions than actual schedules.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Score: 55.0

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议注意主谓一致,完整表达观点,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: Some people might dislike making lists because they know they might not complete all the tasks, which can make them feel stressed.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Score: 60.0

Suggestion: 回答较长且有重复,语法和表达不够准确。建议简洁表达,避免重复,并使用更自然的连接词。

Example: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see them anytime, which helps me remember better than using my phone.

Grammar

Verb + -ing form

× Yes I do make a list when I go to shopping 'cause it will clearly reminds me of what I'm going to buy an also avoid me of over spending too much money.

Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because it clearly reminds me of what I'm going to buy and also helps me avoid overspending too much money.

动词go后面接动名词形式,不能用to shopping,应改为go shopping。此外,reminds主语是it,第三人称单数,动词应为reminds,原句正确。avoid后面不加介词of,直接接动词不定式或动名词,这里用helps me avoid更合适。

There be issue

× Actually I do make this when I work, but it doesn't really help 'cause there is always a change between a suddenly change so.

Actually, I do make this when I work, but it doesn't really help because there is always a sudden change.

表达“突然的变化”应使用形容词sudden修饰名词change,而不是副词suddenly。there is后面不需要加介词between和冠词a。

Singular and plural issue

× Maybe some people knows that even though you make a less, you might actually not going to complete it or you might feel stressful of.

Maybe some people know that even though you make a list, you might actually not complete it or you might feel stressed about it.

people是复数,谓语动词应为know而非knows。less应为list,意思是“清单”。feel后面接形容词stressed而非stressful,且搭配介词about。

Verb + -ing form

× Maybe some people knows that even though you make a less, you might actually not going to complete it or you might feel stressful of.

Maybe some people know that even though you make a list, you might actually not complete it or you might feel stressed about it.

might后面接动词原形,不能用going to。此处应为might not complete。

Verb + -ing form

× Actually, I will prefer like a list on paper more than on my phone 'cause on my phone I won't, maybe I will forget or I won't even open my note, but on paper I can see every like every time, any time I remind me more quickly.

Actually, I prefer a list on paper more than on my phone because on my phone I might forget or might not even open my notes, but on paper I can see it every time and it reminds me more quickly.

prefer后面直接接名词,不用will。might比will更合适表达可能性。notes应为复数。remind me应为it reminds me,主语缺失。

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