Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Oh yeah, before I go shopping I always made a list before go to supermarket, forget something that I want.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yeah, I already make a list before I work. Because people in the office worker or calculate worker, they don't have time to remember things the list make. Ash a comfortable to Japan or stick it for a pen.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
In my opinion, I think people like making list because. They can prioritize themselves. Anne. Can improve. Their memoli together, lit, done.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I will say I prefer to make a lid arm Bible my fallen sometime I mailed it on paper but it doesn't work for me. I love to write everything in my notepad in all mobile phone and pick up the phone and get something done.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Try to use correct tense and grammar, and make your answer more natural and clear. For example, say 'I always make a list before I go shopping so I don't forget anything.' Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'before' twice.
Example: I always make a list before I go shopping so I don't forget anything I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Focus on clear and correct sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, I make a list before work because it helps me remember tasks. It is very convenient to use a list, either on paper or on my phone.' Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect words.
Example: Yes, I make a list before work because it helps me remember my tasks. It is very convenient to use a list, either on paper or on my phone.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons using linking words. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. However, lists can help prioritize tasks and improve memory.'
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. However, lists can help prioritize tasks and improve memory.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: Try to speak clearly and use correct vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your preference. For example, 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily check it anytime. Sometimes I try paper lists, but they don't work well for me.'
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily check it anytime. Sometimes I try paper lists, but they don't work well for me.
× Oh yeah, before I go shopping I always made a list before go to supermarket, forget something that I want.
✓ Oh yeah, before I go shopping I always make a list before going to the supermarket, so I don't forget something that I want.
The sentence mixes past tense 'made' with present habitual action 'always'. The correct tense is present simple 'make' to indicate a habitual action. Also, 'before go' should be 'before going' to use the gerund after 'before'. Adding 'so I don't forget' clarifies the purpose.
× Oh yeah, before I go shopping I always made a list before go to supermarket, forget something that I want.
✓ Oh yeah, before I go shopping I always make a list before going to the supermarket, so I don't forget something that I want.
After 'before', the verb should be in the -ing form (gerund), so 'go' should be 'going'. This is a common grammatical structure in English.
× Yeah, I already make a list before I work.
✓ Yeah, I already make a list before I work.
The sentence is acceptable but 'already' is usually used with present perfect tense. To be more natural, it could be 'Yeah, I always make a list before I work.' However, since 'already' is not in the problem list, no correction is made.
× Because people in the office worker or calculate worker, they don't have time to remember things the list make.
✓ Because people who work in the office or as accountants don't have time to remember things from the list.
The phrase 'people in the office worker or calculate worker' is incorrect. It should be 'people who work in the office or as accountants'. Also, 'the list make' is incorrect; it should be 'from the list'. This corrects pronoun and noun usage.
× Ash a comfortable to Japan or stick it for a pen.
✓ They find it comfortable to use a pen to stick the list somewhere.
The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It seems to mean that people find it comfortable to stick the list with a pen. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.
× In my opinion, I think people like making list because. They can prioritize themselves. Anne. Can improve. Their memoli together, lit, done.
✓ In my opinion, I think people like making lists because they can prioritize themselves and improve their memory to get things done.
The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Anne' and 'lit' seem to be errors or misheard words. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence with proper structure.
× In my opinion, I think people like making list because.
✓ In my opinion, I think people like making lists because.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general activity of making lists.
× Anne. Can improve. Their memoli together, lit, done.
✓ They can improve their memory to get things done.
'Anne' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'and'. 'Memoli' should be 'memory'. The sentence is corrected to proper pronoun use and vocabulary.
× I will say I prefer to make a lid arm Bible my fallen sometime I mailed it on paper but it doesn't work for me.
✓ I will say I prefer to make a list on my phone. Sometimes I write it on paper but it doesn't work for me.
The original sentence contains many errors: 'lid arm Bible my fallen' is unintelligible and likely a mishearing of 'list on my phone'. 'Mailed' should be 'write'. The correction clarifies pronoun and vocabulary usage.
× I love to write everything in my notepad in all mobile phone and pick up the phone and get something done.
✓ I love to write everything in my notepad on my mobile phone and then pick up the phone to get things done.
The sentence structure is awkward and unclear. 'In all mobile phone' should be 'on my mobile phone'. Adding 'then' improves flow and clarity.