List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural by using correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words.

Example: To be honest, I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I shop randomly and decide what to buy when I visit the department store.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I always make a list for my work schedule because I am very busy these days. If I don't make a list, I might forget important tasks.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and does not provide meaningful content. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains unclear phrases. Try to give a complete and coherent response with clear reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten at home.

× To be honest. I have not a such kind of habit when making or list when I go for shopping.

✓ To be honest, I do not have such a habit of making a list when I go shopping.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word order. 'I have not a such kind of habit' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not have such a habit'. Also, 'making or list' is unclear and should be 'making a list'. The sentence should be combined properly with a comma after 'To be honest'.

× Usually I shopping randomly.

✓ Usually, I shop randomly.

The verb 'shopping' is incorrectly used as a present participle without an auxiliary verb. The correct simple present tense verb 'shop' should be used here to match the subject 'I'.

× I have not specifically schedule per shopping an when I visit the department store and I look the thing.

✓ I do not have a specific schedule for shopping, and when I visit the department store, I look at things.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'have not specifically schedule' should be 'do not have a specific schedule'; 'per shopping an' is incorrect and should be 'for shopping'; 'look the thing' is incorrect and should be 'look at things'. The sentence structure is also corrected for clarity.

× His, of course. I make a list for my work schedule because nowadays I am very busy.

✓ Yes, of course. I make a list for my work schedule because nowadays I am very busy.

'His' is incorrect and should be 'Yes' to answer affirmatively. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× And therefore if I don't make a list, I may be furthered the things.

✓ Therefore, if I don't make a list, I may forget things.

'May be furthered the things' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'may forget things'. Also, 'And therefore' is redundant; 'Therefore' alone is sufficient to start the sentence.

× So what I need to do your own thing?

✓ So I need to do my own thing.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun usage.

× I think people are ignoring Porter making list.

✓ I think people ignore making lists.

'Ignoring Porter making list' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence uses the simple present tense and corrects the phrase to 'ignore making lists'.

× Maybe they they can. At him, Worthy attacks. Cool. Currently.

✓ Maybe they can. Currently, I am not sure what you mean.

The original sentence is incoherent and does not form a meaningful statement. The correction acknowledges the uncertainty and attempts to clarify.

× Well, I like to make a list in my phone rather than paper because.

✓ Well, I like to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because...

The correct preposition for devices like phones is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'rather than paper' should be 'rather than on paper' for parallel structure.

× And I always carry my phone in my pocket, but paper maybe law store igang poured the paper in my home or anywhere so that.

✓ I always carry my phone in my pocket, but paper may be lost or left at home or somewhere else.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'law store igang poured'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning about paper lists being easily lost or left behind.

× If I make a note in my mobile pen, mobile ****.

✓ If I make a note on my mobile phone, I can always access it.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the thought and uses correct terminology and structure.