List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some repetition and unclear phrases, such as "I can take the I can only visit the shop". To improve, try to avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Moreover, by having a list, I can visit the store just once, which saves me time and effort.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear words and incomplete sentences, such as "cat mic work" and "regular ma'am manner." To improve, focus on clear pronunciation and sentence structure. Also, provide specific details and use linking words to explain how making lists helps your work.

Example: Yes, I like to make lists for my academic work because they help me organize my tasks. As a result, I can follow a regular schedule and complete my assignments on time, which improves my performance.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear phrases. To improve, try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming. They believe that spending time on lists wastes their time, so they prefer to work without them.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear and incomplete phrases like "I'm recruiting form and it is this." To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper lists can be easily lost. Since I always have my phone with me, it's the safest and most convenient way to keep track of my shopping items.

× And apart from that, by making a list, I can take the I can only visit the shop to I can only visit to the show for the material that I required.

✓ And apart from that, by making a list, I can only visit the shop for the material that I require.

The original sentence contains repeated and misplaced phrases causing confusion and incorrect sentence structure. Simplifying and removing redundant parts clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, I like to make list for my cat mic work.

✓ Yes, I like to make a list for my academic work.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list', and 'cat mic' is a mishearing or typo for 'academic'. Adding the article and correcting the word improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Also it helps me to make a proper schedule for it and it.

✓ Also, it helps me to make a proper schedule for it.

The original sentence ends with an unnecessary 'and it' which makes it incomplete and confusing. Removing the redundant phrase corrects the sentence structure.

× And by making a list I can do it in a regular ma'am manner due to which I'm able to get a good score.

✓ And by making a list, I can do it in a regular manner, due to which I'm able to get a good score.

The phrase 'regular ma'am manner' is incorrect; 'ma'am' is misplaced. Removing 'ma'am' and adding commas improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, some people don't like to make list becauses it is because they think it is a boring thing.

✓ Well, some people don't like to make lists because they think it is a boring thing.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. Also, 'becauses it is because' is redundant; simplifying to 'because' improves clarity.

× By making list do they have do you waste their time under they have spent a lot of time on it do tools they don't like it.

✓ They think making lists wastes their time because they have to spend a lot of time on it, so they don't like it.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. Reordering and simplifying the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Well I prefer to make list on my phone because sometime a paper could be lossed and phone is always in my hand and I'm think I'm recruiting form and it is this it is the safest way to carry my list.

✓ Well, I prefer to make lists on my phone because sometimes paper can be lost, and my phone is always in my hand. I think it's the safest way to carry my list.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Could be lossed' is incorrect; the correct past participle is 'lost'. The phrase 'I'm recruiting form and it is this' is unclear and likely a mishearing; it has been removed for clarity. Adding commas and correcting verb forms improves the sentence.