List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping, usually once a week. I have many things to buy, so making a list helps me remember everything I need.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa mạch lạc. Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và liên kết câu bằng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: Yes, absolutely. Making a list is the first thing I do when I start work. I list all the tasks I need to complete that day, which helps me organize my work and improve my performance.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn để thể hiện ý kiến một cách tự nhiên.

Example: Some people might find making lists time-consuming or trust their memory. However, I believe making a list is not a waste of time because it only takes me about five minutes each day.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý không rõ ràng. Hãy luyện tập cách diễn đạt tự nhiên, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

Example: It depends on the situation. When I work from home, I prefer to write my list on sticky notes and put them on my laptop. But when I work in the office, I prefer to use my phone because it is more portable and convenient.

× Yes always I off finished go shopping for like once a week.

✓ Yes, I always finish going shopping about once a week.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. The correct sentence places the adverb 'always' after the subject 'I' and uses the correct verb form 'finish going' to indicate completion of the action. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So I have a numerous thing to buy.

✓ So I have numerous things to buy.

'Numerous' is used with plural countable nouns, so 'thing' should be pluralized to 'things'. This corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× Team remember everything I need to make a list of things that I need to buy.

✓ To remember everything, I need to make a list of things that I need to buy.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. Starting with 'To remember everything' clarifies the purpose of making a list and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, absolutely. Anne.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

'Anne' appears to be an extraneous word or mishearing and does not fit the sentence. Removing it corrects the sentence.

× Making a list is the first thing that I do when I go to work.

✓ Making a list is the first thing that I do when I go to work.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× I will list everything that I need to do in that day into a short list and it allowed me to organize all my work and it helped me too.

✓ I list everything that I need to do that day in a short list, and it allows me to organize all my work and helps me too.

The original sentence mixes tenses incorrectly ('will list' and 'allowed'). Changing to present tense 'list', 'allows', and 'helps' maintains consistency and clarity.

× Improve my work performance.

✓ Improve my work performance.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased for completeness.

× Some people might think that making lists are time consuming or that they are confident with their memorability.

✓ Some people might think that making lists is time-consuming or that they are confident in their memory.

'Making lists' is singular as a subject, so the verb should be 'is'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. 'Confident with their memorability' is incorrect; 'confident in their memory' is the correct phrase.

× However, I think that making a list is never time a waste of time because I just have to spend like 5 minutes everyday to make a list.

✓ However, I think that making a list is never a waste of time because I only have to spend about 5 minutes every day to make a list.

The phrase 'time a waste of time' is incorrect; it should be 'a waste of time'. 'Like' is informal and should be replaced with 'about'. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverbial phrase).

× It depends on the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× When I work from home, I prefer to making A to make a list.

✓ When I work from home, I prefer to make a list.

After 'prefer to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'making A to make a list' is unclear and redundant; simplified to 'make a list'.

× On a sticky note as they get to my laptop, but when I worked in the office I prefer sunod on my phone because.

✓ I write it on a sticky note and put it on my laptop, but when I work in the office, I prefer to use my phone because

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting it clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× The firm is more portable and convenient for me to carry around.

✓ The phone is more portable and convenient for me to carry around.

'Firm' is a typo or mishearing; it should be 'phone' to make sense in context.