List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni answer e clear structure maintain korun. Prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor karon ba supporting details din. Sentence gulo ke complete r clear rakhen. Linking words use korun jemon 'because' ba 'so' jate answer ta logical hoy.

Example: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, sometimes I do make a list because I tend to forget items I need, so it helps me remember everything.

Suggestion: Answer e clear topic sentence din, tarpor supporting details diye explain korun. Sentence gulo ke complete r logical banan. Linking words use korun jemon 'because' ba 'so' jate answer ta bhalo hoy.

Example: Yes, I make lists for my work because my tasks are very important and need careful attention. Making lists helps me stay organized and ensures I complete all my duties on time.

Suggestion: Apnar answer e kichu confusion ache. Prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor karon bolun. Sentence gulo ke complete r clear rakhen. Linking words use korun jemon 'because' ba 'however' jate answer ta logical hoy.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory. However, I think lists are useful because they help us remember tasks and stay organized.

Suggestion: Answer e clear topic sentence din, tarpor karon bolun. Sentence gulo ke complete r logical banan. Linking words use korun jemon 'because' ba 'so' jate answer ta bhalo hoy. Vocabulary improve korun.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can easily check and update my list anytime. Paper lists can be lost or hard to find, so using my phone is better for me.

× Is Eli. I don't make a list. When I arrived at shop.

✓ I don't make a list when I arrive at the shop.

The original sentence has sentence fragments and incorrect word order. 'Is Eli' is unclear and unrelated. 'When I arrived at shop' is a fragment and missing the article 'the' before 'shop'. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a complete sentence with proper structure and article usage.

× When I arrived at shop.

✓ When I arrived at the shop.

The noun 'shop' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Omitting 'the' before 'shop' is incorrect in this context.

× But sometimes I make a list because of. My. Because of I cannot remember that, that's why.

✓ But sometimes I make a list because I cannot remember things, that's why.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incomplete phrases like 'because of. My.' which do not convey clear meaning. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence explaining the reason for making a list.

× Is really I make list for my work becauses in my work is very crucial and vital.

✓ I really make a list for my work because my work is very crucial and vital.

The original sentence has incorrect word order ('Is really I make list') and missing articles ('make list' should be 'make a list'). 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The correction fixes word order, spelling, and article usage.

× Role play for. For work.

✓ I do role plays for work.

The original phrase is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I do' and making 'role play' plural clarifies the meaning. 'For work' is correctly used as a prepositional phrase.

× And that's why I make a list and sometimes list. Makes me. Fulfill to.

✓ And that's why I make a list, and sometimes the list helps me to fulfill my tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Sometimes list. Makes me. Fulfill to.' is not a proper sentence. The correction provides a complete sentence explaining how the list helps.

× From my perspective, making list is not a. Comparative things, it's a vital things for us because making list.

✓ From my perspective, making a list is not a comparative thing; it's a vital thing for us because making a list

The original sentence has incorrect article usage ('making list' should be 'making a list') and incorrect plural forms ('things' should be 'thing'). 'Comparative things' is unclear; 'comparative thing' is more appropriate here.

× Help me or us to remember all that.

✓ Helps me or us to remember everything.

The verb should agree with the singular subject 'making a list', so 'help' should be 'helps'. Also, 'all that' is vague; 'everything' is clearer.

× Ask Ann. Complete the task and ensure that I do not forget anything and some people lie.

✓ to complete the task and ensure that I do not forget anything. Some people lie.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Ask Ann.' seems unrelated. The correction completes the sentence logically and separates the last idea into a new sentence.

× Basically I prefer 2 N or. List on my phone because.

✓ Basically, I prefer to make a list on my phone because

'2 N or.' is unclear and likely a transcription error. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× Paper could not find any time and if I. 1-2 check it.

✓ I cannot find time to use paper, and if I check it,

The original sentence is unclear and has incorrect preposition usage. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects preposition use.

× I can easily paid by mobile phone, that's why I prefer list. On mobile phone.

✓ I can easily access it on my mobile phone, that's why I prefer making lists on my mobile phone.

'Paid by mobile phone' is incorrect; likely meant 'accessed' or 'checked'. Also, 'prefer list' should be 'prefer making lists'. The correction fixes verb usage and sentence structure.