Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Well yes, I do make A to do list whenever I go for a shopping as it is really essential for a person to have the correct notes for. What things do you want to buy?
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes I told me all this for my study purposes and work one also as it keep me organized and it makes my whole process more efficient So having a list. That what we have to do the whole day is very essential for a person.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
By making list we have to complete all the task of the day an there are numerous people who don't like to make list as the future day is unpredictable so they don't know that what will be the new work they're going to handle next day. So it will hinder their whole process.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I preferred to make collision of people as it keeps me remember that what I have to perform. For example, if I ever make a list on my phone, I get distracted from the task that I have to given it make my process less efficiant or and also it waste my all time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear. Avoid unnecessary questions back to the examiner and focus on directly answering the question. Use simple and correct sentence structures, and keep your answer concise within 3-4 sentences.
Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time. For example, last week I wrote down all the groceries I needed and finished shopping quickly.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Start with a direct answer, then explain why it works for you using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and use relevant vocabulary.
Example: Yes, I make lists for both my studies and work because they help me stay organized. Having a list makes my tasks more efficient, so I can complete everything on time. It is very important for me to plan my day this way.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Try to improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas. Provide a clear reason and explain it with specific details in 3-4 sentences.
Example: Some people don't like making lists because they feel the next day is unpredictable. They think new tasks may come up, so a list might not be useful. Therefore, they prefer to be flexible rather than follow a strict plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid confusing phrases and keep your answer focused and concise.
Example: I prefer to make lists on paper because it helps me remember my tasks better. When I use my phone, I often get distracted by other apps, which wastes my time. So, paper lists help me stay focused and efficient.
× Well yes, I do make A to do list whenever I go for a shopping as it is really essential for a person to have the correct notes for.
✓ Well yes, I do make a to-do list whenever I go shopping as it is really essential for a person to have the correct notes.
The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' without 'a'. This improves naturalness and correctness in English (Malaysia).
× Well yes, I do make A to do list whenever I go for a shopping as it is really essential for a person to have the correct notes for.
✓ Well yes, I do make a to-do list whenever I go shopping as it is really essential for a person to have the correct notes.
The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without 'for a'. This is a common preposition error in English (Malaysia).
× What things do you want to buy?
✓ What things do you want to buy?
This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.
× Yes I told me all this for my study purposes and work one also as it keep me organized and it makes my whole process more efficient So having a list.
✓ Yes, I told myself all this for my study purposes and work as well, as it keeps me organized and makes my whole process more efficient. So having a list...
The reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used instead of 'me' after 'told'. Also, 'work one also' is unclear and corrected to 'work as well'. 'It keep' should be 'it keeps' to agree with singular subject. Sentence structure is improved for clarity in English (Malaysia).
× That what we have to do the whole day is very essential for a person.
✓ What we have to do the whole day is very essential for a person.
The phrase 'That what' is incorrect; it should be 'What'. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness in English (Malaysia).
× By making list we have to complete all the task of the day an there are numerous people who don't like to make list as the future day is unpredictable so they don't know that what will be the new work they're going to handle next day.
✓ By making a list, we have to complete all the tasks of the day and there are numerous people who don't like to make lists as the future day is unpredictable, so they don't know what new work they will have to handle the next day.
The singular 'list' and 'task' should be plural 'lists' and 'tasks' to match the context. 'An' is a typo for 'and'. 'That what' is incorrect; 'what' alone suffices. Also, 'will be the new work they're going to handle' is simplified to 'they will have to handle'. These corrections improve quantifier use and sentence clarity in English (Malaysia).
× By making list we have to complete all the task of the day an there are numerous people who don't like to make list as the future day is unpredictable so they don't know that what will be the new work they're going to handle next day.
✓ By making a list, we have to complete all the tasks of the day and there are numerous people who don't like to make lists as the future day is unpredictable, so they don't know what new work they will have to handle the next day.
Prepositions like 'of the day' are correct, but the sentence needed commas for clarity. Also, 'next day' should be 'the next day' to specify time. These adjustments improve prepositional and temporal expression in English (Malaysia).
× By making list we have to complete all the task of the day an there are numerous people who don't like to make list as the future day is unpredictable so they don't know that what will be the new work they're going to handle next day.
✓ By making a list, we have to complete all the tasks of the day and there are numerous people who don't like to make lists as the future day is unpredictable, so they don't know what new work they will have to handle the next day.
The pronoun 'they' is correctly used here; no correction needed. The phrase 'that what' is incorrect and corrected to 'what'. This improves pronoun and relative clause usage in English (Malaysia).
× I preferred to make collision of people as it keeps me remember that what I have to perform.
✓ I prefer to make a list as it helps me remember what I have to do.
'Preferred' is past tense but context suggests present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. 'Collision of people' is unclear and replaced with 'a list'. 'Keeps me remember' is incorrect; 'helps me remember' is correct. 'What I have to perform' is unnatural; 'what I have to do' is better. These corrections improve tense and verb usage in English (Malaysia).
× I preferred to make collision of people as it keeps me remember that what I have to perform.
✓ I prefer to make a list as it helps me remember what I have to do.
'Collision of people' is incorrect and replaced with 'a list' to make sense. This corrects the quantifier and noun usage in English (Malaysia).
× For example, if I ever make a list on my phone, I get distracted from the task that I have to given it make my process less efficiant or and also it waste my all time.
✓ For example, if I ever make a list on my phone, I get distracted from the task that I have to do, which makes my process less efficient and also wastes all my time.
'Given it' is incorrect; 'have to do' is correct. 'Waste my all time' should be 'wastes all my time'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected for clarity and correctness in English (Malaysia).
× For example, if I ever make a list on my phone, I get distracted from the task that I have to given it make my process less efficiant or and also it waste my all time.
✓ For example, if I ever make a list on my phone, I get distracted from the task that I have to do, which makes my process less efficient and also wastes all my time.
'Given' is past participle but incorrect here; 'have to do' is present tense and correct. 'Waste' should be 'wastes' to agree with singular subject. These corrections fix tense errors in English (Malaysia).