List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more structured and concise. Try to avoid redundancy and complete your sentences fully. For example, clarify the last sentence about the budget and link your ideas more smoothly.

Example: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse and see what catches my eye. However, I always set a weekly budget to help me manage my spending effectively.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid short, choppy sentences by combining ideas for better flow.

Example: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work, and it works well. I review it every morning, which helps me organise my day efficiently. For instance, I usually start by answering emails before attending meetings or making calls.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to use linking words and more formal vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating questions within your answer and focus on giving clear reasons.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom to explore and discover new things. Additionally, creating a list can be time-consuming, which discourages them from doing it.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains some errors. Please clarify your points, avoid incomplete sentences, and use correct vocabulary. Also, explain why you prefer each method with linking words.

Example: I prefer both methods depending on the situation. At the office, I usually take notes by hand because it's faster and I can access them anytime. However, when I go shopping, I use my phone since it's a handy and convenient tool.

× I like to wander in new products and new things to buy.

✓ I like to wander among new products and new things to buy.

The verb 'wander' is typically followed by the preposition 'among' when referring to moving around within a group or collection of items. Using 'in' here is incorrect. Correct preposition use improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I like to have a budget for every week that helps me to set up my.

✓ I like to have a budget for every week that helps me to set up my spending.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'my' which is incomplete and unclear. Adding the noun 'spending' completes the thought and clarifies what the budget helps to set up, improving sentence structure.

× Yes, I like to have A to do list for my work.

✓ Yes, I like to have a to-do list for my work.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the noun phrase. Proper article usage and hyphenation are important for grammatical correctness.

× So probably I will start answering emails and then having some meetings or some calls.

✓ So probably I will start by answering emails and then having some meetings or some calls.

The phrase 'start answering' is correct, but 'then having' is awkward. Adding 'by' after 'start' clarifies the sequence, and 'then have' would be better than 'then having'. However, to keep the original structure, adding 'by' improves clarity.

× Probably making a list can restrict you from the things you wanna do.

✓ Probably making a list can restrict you from the things you want to do.

The word 'wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' in formal or semi-formal speech. This improves clarity and appropriateness of language.

× Do you wanna buy? You wanna discover?

✓ Do you want to buy? Do you want to discover?

Again, 'wanna' is informal and should be replaced with 'want to' for proper grammar and clarity.

× But in my case for me is easier to have a list and don't put much time and thinking what I need to do now.

✓ But in my case, it is easier to have a list and not spend much time thinking about what I need to do now.

The original sentence lacks a subject ('it') and uses incorrect verb forms ('don't put much time and thinking'). The correction adds the subject and uses proper verb forms to improve sentence structure and clarity.

× Boat. If I am at the office are usually take notes by hand so that helps me to make it it faster and I can go to them anytime.

✓ Both. If I am at the office, I usually take notes by hand so that helps me to do it faster and I can refer to them anytime.

'Boat' is likely a typo for 'both'. The sentence also misses the subject 'I' before 'usually take notes'. 'Make it it faster' is incorrect; 'do it faster' is appropriate. These corrections fix singular/plural issues and sentence structure.

× But if I'm going to the shops I usually use my phone so it is handy. Anna easy tool.

✓ But if I'm going to the shops, I usually use my phone because it is handy and an easy tool.

The sentence 'Anna easy tool' is a typo and incomplete. It should be 'an easy tool'. Also, connecting the ideas with 'because' improves sentence flow and clarity.