Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
I would say no, I'm not that kind of person who like to make a very detailed plan dev what I want you by. I'm the kind of person who just grabs crushed with things I need to buy and when high in the supermarket so I don't make a detailed list when I shop.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Is it work? Yes I definitely will. I'm a student right now so I have a lot of assignment I exams to do in a semester. I will make a very detailed list to follow up and I think it really works. With the help of a list I can have a more clear outline of what I need to do and what support.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Well, I will say maybe for them making list is bothering and time consuming. For them they may don't like to do things regularly and follow and they hate following plans. For maybe some individuals prefer keep things flexible and like to do tasks spontaneously. So yeah.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
I prefer making list on my phone because it's always raised me even when I go to the bathroom. This makes it very convenient and easy to check or add items anytime. Compared to paper, using my phone is much more practical and efficient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免重复和不必要的词汇,同时注意时态和单复数的正确使用。
Example: No, I usually don't make a detailed shopping list. I prefer to buy things spontaneously when I am at the supermarket.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题,建议使用完整句子,注意冠词和复数形式,增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: Yes, I definitely make lists for my work. As a student, I have many assignments and exams each semester, so I create detailed lists to keep track of my tasks. This helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅,建议使用更准确的词汇和句型,避免重复,使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it bothersome and time-consuming. They may prefer to keep things flexible and enjoy doing tasks spontaneously rather than following strict plans.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答表达较清晰,但有个别词汇使用不当,建议注意词汇的准确性和句子结构的完整性。
Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, even when I go to the bathroom. This makes it very convenient to check or add items anytime. Compared to paper, using my phone is more practical and efficient.
× I'm not that kind of person who like to make a very detailed plan dev what I want you by.
✓ I'm not that kind of person who likes to make a very detailed plan about what I want to buy.
这里的主语是单数形式的"person",所以谓语动词"like"应使用第三人称单数形式"likes"。另外,句中"dev what I want you by"是拼写错误,应改为"about what I want to buy"。
× I'm the kind of person who just grabs crushed with things I need to buy and when high in the supermarket so I don't make a detailed list when I shop.
✓ I'm the kind of person who just grabs things I need to buy when I am in the supermarket, so I don't make a detailed list when I shop.
句中"grabs crushed with things"和"when high in the supermarket"是错误表达,应改为"grabs things"和"when I am in the supermarket"。此外,保持主谓一致和句子通顺。
× I have a lot of assignment I exams to do in a semester.
✓ I have a lot of assignments and exams to do in a semester.
"assignment"应使用复数形式"assignments",因为这里表示多个任务。
× For them they may don't like to do things regularly and follow and they hate following plans.
✓ For them, they may not like to do things regularly and follow plans, and they hate following plans.
"may don't like"是不正确的,应改为"may not like"。此外,句子结构需要调整以保持通顺。
× I prefer making list on my phone because it's always raised me even when I go to the bathroom.
✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me even when I go to the bathroom.
"raised me"用法错误,应改为"with me"表示手机总是在身边。
× I prefer making list on my phone because it's always raised me even when I go to the bathroom.
✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me even when I go to the bathroom.
"list"应使用复数形式"lists",因为这里指的是制作多个购物清单的习惯。