List— Part 1 Report

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Conversation

Part 1

Examiner

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidate

Well, actually I don't like to make list when I go shopping because I just feel casual to to the shop. So when I go shopping I just look at something that I am interested in and.

Examiner

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidate

Yes, sometimes I will make A to do list of my daily work and that lets is very effective to myself I think because I have a clear crudes about my work and I will never forget.

Examiner

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidate

Well, maybe they just want to get some feeling of their life. I think because if you if I have A to do list, I will pay my attention on what should I do next, which means I can't.

Examiner

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidate

I preferred to write it down rather then record it on my phone because I can put a note on my desk in a clear position which can. Which can know tease me about it.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 6.0Fluency & Coherence: 6.0Pronunciation: 6.0Grammar: 5.5Lexical Resource: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Score: 60.0

Suggestion: 你的回答有些语法错误,表达不够自然,且句子结构不完整。建议在回答时使用完整句子,避免重复和语法错误,同时增加一些具体细节,使回答更丰富。

Example: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to browse casually and buy things that catch my interest at the moment.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Score: 65.0

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和拼写错误,如“lets is”,“clear crudes”,影响表达清晰度。建议使用正确的词汇和语法,并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: Yes, I sometimes make a to-do list for my daily work, and it is very effective because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Score: 50.0

Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,缺少具体细节和逻辑连接。建议明确表达观点,使用完整句子,并提供具体原因或例子。

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to live spontaneously and feel more relaxed without strict plans.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Score: 55.0

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子,表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子,避免重复,并且说明原因时更具体。

Example: I prefer to write my lists on paper because I can place the notes on my desk where I can easily see them and be reminded of my tasks.

Grammar

Singular and plural issue

× Well, actually I don't like to make list when I go shopping because I just feel casual to to the shop.

✓ Well, actually I don't like to make lists when I go shopping because I just feel casual going to the shop.

这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”,因为表达的是一般习惯或多次行为。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, actually I don't like to make list when I go shopping because I just feel casual to to the shop.

✓ Well, actually I don't like to make lists when I go shopping because I just feel casual going to the shop.

“feel casual to to the shop”中“to to”重复且用法错误,应该用动名词短语“going to the shop”表示动作。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, sometimes I will make A to do list of my daily work and that lets is very effective to myself I think because I have a clear crudes about my work and I will never forget.

✓ Yes, sometimes I will make a to-do list of my daily work and that is very effective for me I think because I have a clear idea about my work and I will never forget.

“lets is”应为“that is”,“crudes”应为“idea”,且“a to do list”中“to do”应连字符为“to-do list”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, sometimes I will make A to do list of my daily work and that lets is very effective to myself I think because I have a clear crudes about my work and I will never forget.

✓ Yes, sometimes I will make a to-do list of my daily work and that is very effective for me I think because I have a clear idea about my work and I will never forget.

“effective to myself”中“to”用法错误,正确应为“effective for me”,表示对某人有效。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Well, maybe they just want to get some feeling of their life.

✓ Well, maybe they just want to get some feeling from their life.

“get some feeling of their life”表达不准确,应该用“get some feeling from their life”,表示从生活中获得感觉。

Sentence structure errors

× I think because if you if I have A to do list, I will pay my attention on what should I do next, which means I can't.

✓ I think that if I have a to-do list, I will pay attention to what I should do next, which means I can't relax.

句子结构混乱,“if you if I”重复且不完整,且“pay my attention on”应为“pay attention to”,最后“which means I can't”不完整,需补充。

Past tense issue

× I preferred to write it down rather then record it on my phone because I can put a note on my desk in a clear position which can.

✓ I prefer to write it down rather than record it on my phone because I can put a note on my desk in a clear position which can remind me about it.

“preferred”用过去式不符合语境,应为一般现在时“prefer”;“then”应为“than”;句子末尾不完整,需补充完整。

Vocabulary

Clear— Understandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
Interested— Attentive; Concerned; Partisan
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