List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more direct and clear, avoid redundancy, and use correct sentence structures. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily. Making a list helps me remember all the items I need to buy, so I don't miss anything important.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases and informal language. Try to use formal and clear expressions, and connect your ideas logically with linking words. Also, avoid slang and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Example: Yes, I often make a list for my work, and it works very well. By doing so, I feel more confident and organized because I am sure I won't forget any tasks. Therefore, I believe making lists is very helpful.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be specific and avoid vague expressions.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring. Moreover, they think it takes too much time. These are the main reasons why they avoid writing lists.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid filler words and ensure grammatical correctness.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Sometimes, I might forget a paper list or lose it, but my phone is less likely to be lost, so it is more convenient.

× I often know donut things which I want to buy a while shopping because I'm an absent minded person so it is very difficult for me to remember the things or making a list is easy for me to recall the things which I want to buy.

✓ I often forget things which I want to buy while shopping because I'm an absent-minded person, so it is very difficult for me to remember the things. Making a list is easy for me to recall the things which I want to buy.

The phrase 'donut things' is incorrect; it should be 'forget things' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'a while shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'while shopping'. The sentence also had plural and singular mismatches that were corrected for clarity.

× I often know donut things which I want to buy a while shopping because I'm an absent minded person so it is very difficult for me to remember the things or making a list is easy for me to recall the things which I want to buy.

✓ I often forget things which I want to buy while shopping because I'm an absent-minded person, so it is very difficult for me to remember the things. Making a list is easy for me to recall the things which I want to buy.

The adjective 'absent minded' should be hyphenated as 'absent-minded' when used before a noun or as a compound adjective.

× Some people don't like making list because they find it at a boring practice.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it a boring practice.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists. Also, 'at a boring practice' is incorrect; it should be 'a boring practice' without 'at'.

× Some people don't like making list because they find it at a boring practice.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it a boring practice.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before 'a boring practice'. The correct phrase is 'find it a boring practice' without 'at'.

× Moreover another reason is that they find it time consuming process.

✓ Moreover, another reason is that they find it a time-consuming process.

A comma is needed after 'Moreover' to separate the introductory adverb. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× So I think these are the two reasons why people don't prefer to know down that thing.

✓ So I think these are the two reasons why people don't prefer to note down those things.

The phrase 'know down that thing' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'note down those things'. 'Note down' means to write something, and 'those things' is plural to match the context.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I uh, I always keep my mobile phone with me instead.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always keep my mobile phone with me.

The word 'instead' is unnecessary and confusing here. The sentence is clearer without it. Also, 'uh' is a filler and can be omitted for clarity.

× People I can forget sometimes due to a shortage of time and even people could be lost much easily rather than mobile.

✓ People can forget sometimes due to a shortage of time, and even phones could be lost much more easily than mobiles.

The sentence is unclear and has plural/singular issues. 'People I can forget' is incorrect; it should be 'People can forget'. 'Phones' or 'mobiles' should be used consistently. 'Much easily' should be 'much more easily'. The comparison 'rather than mobile' should be 'than mobiles'.