Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes I need to leave Michael is Quinn stop it causes her help me remember what I need to buy a new. Yes.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I just leave my To Do List work because it's helped me organize my desk in a priority days them efficiently effectively. For example, I checked my e-mail verse in the incomplete Mike will work on a one day.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
Wow, in my opinion, I think many people don't lie by Kellys because they think is all take too long time and they again editing and I believe thinking remember all what I need to do.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Wound hiding I refilled Michael is on my phone because. Is very convenient and quick and I can bring every way. I mean yes.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn.
Example: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time at the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lộn xộn và thiếu liên kết. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng.
Example: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and manage my time efficiently. For example, I check my emails first and then focus on unfinished projects during the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 25.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến cá nhân một cách rõ ràng.
Example: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time and they prefer to remember tasks by themselves.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi phát âm hoặc từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để giải thích lý do của mình.
Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient, quick, and I can carry it anywhere easily.
× Yes I need to leave Michael is Quinn stop it causes her help me remember what I need to buy a new. Yes.
✓ Yes, I need to make a list because it helps me remember what I need to buy.
The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure. 'Leave Michael is Quinn stop it causes her' is nonsensical. The corrected sentence clearly expresses the intended meaning with proper grammar and structure.
× Yes, I just leave my To Do List work because it's helped me organize my desk in a priority days them efficiently effectively.
✓ Yes, I just leave my To Do List at work because it helps me organize my tasks by priority efficiently and effectively.
The phrase 'leave my To Do List work' is incorrect; it should be 'leave my To Do List at work'. Also, 'organize my desk in a priority days them' is unclear and incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects preposition use.
× For example, I checked my e-mail verse in the incomplete Mike will work on a one day.
✓ For example, I check my e-mails and work on incomplete tasks in one day.
The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronouns and words ('verse', 'Mike will work'). The correction uses appropriate pronouns and verbs to convey the intended meaning clearly.
× Wow, in my opinion, I think many people don't lie by Kellys because they think is all take too long time and they again editing and I believe thinking remember all what I need to do.
✓ Wow, in my opinion, I think many people don't like making lists because they think it takes too long and they have to keep editing. I believe they find it hard to remember everything they need to do.
The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect pronouns ('lie by Kellys'), verb forms, and sentence structure. The correction fixes these issues for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Wound hiding I refilled Michael is on my phone because. Is very convenient and quick and I can bring every way. I mean yes.
✓ When shopping, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and quick, and I can take it anywhere.
The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words and prepositions ('Wound hiding', 'refilled Michael is'). The correction provides a clear, grammatically correct sentence that fits the context.