List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clearer reasons for making lists.

Example: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy. I usually organise the list by priority, so I buy the most important items first.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Avoid unclear words like 'urborg' and focus on explaining how lists help you manage work tasks. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I usually make lists for my work because I have many assignments with different deadlines. Making lists helps me remember each task and submit them on time.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically. Explain reasons why some people avoid lists and contrast with benefits of lists using linking words.

Example: Some people might dislike making lists because they prefer to remember things mentally. However, lists can help organise tasks and prioritise important activities.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, clarify your points about phone features and apps.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily add or edit items. There are many apps with useful features that help me stay organised.

× Yes, there are so many times when I've made list whenever I go for a shopping because it's easy to remember the things and I just made a list according to the sequence of the things like what is more important things that I have to buy.

✓ Yes, there are so many times when I've made lists whenever I go shopping because it's easy to remember things and I just make a list according to the sequence of things, like which things are more important that I have to buy.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple occasions. 'Go for a shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. 'The things' is better as 'things' without 'the' for general reference. Also, 'I just made a list' should be 'I just make a list' to maintain present tense consistency.

× So accordingly I have to know the things that is important and I have to buy first.

✓ So accordingly I have to know the things that are important and I have to buy them first.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'buy first' needs an object, so 'them' is added for clarity.

× Yes, it's very good if we make list of urborg and I also usually make a list from my work and there are so many type of assignments that given me on my work.

✓ Yes, it's very good if we make lists of our work and I also usually make a list for my work, and there are so many types of assignments given to me at my work.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. 'Urborg' seems to be a typo for 'our work'. 'Type' should be plural 'types' because it refers to multiple assignments. 'Given me' is incorrect; it should be 'given to me'. 'On my work' should be 'at my work' or 'in my work'.

× So I have two made a list just to memorize this assignments and their due date so it works better and I have to submit all assignments on time so that's why I'm making.

✓ So I have to make a list just to memorize these assignments and their due dates, so it works better and I have to submit all assignments on time, so that's why I'm making one.

'Two made' is incorrect; it should be 'to make'. 'This assignments' should be 'these assignments' to match plural. 'Due date' should be plural 'due dates' to match multiple assignments. Added 'one' at the end for clarity.

× Maybe they are forgetting the things and they have to memorize the things and for that they just make notes.

✓ Maybe they forget things and have to memorize them, so they just make notes.

'Are forgetting' is incorrect for habitual action; 'forget' is better. 'The things' is better as 'things' for general reference. 'Memorize the things' should be 'memorize them' to use the correct pronoun.

× Analysts, because from the lists or if we make notes, it's easy to remember the things and we can easily import, do the important things do first.

✓ Actually, because from the lists or if we make notes, it's easy to remember things and we can easily prioritize and do the important things first.

'Analysts' seems to be a misheard or incorrect word; 'Actually' fits better. The sentence structure is awkward; rephrased for clarity. 'Import' is incorrect; 'prioritize' is appropriate. Removed redundant 'do'.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very easy to make list on phone.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very easy to make a list on the phone.

Added 'a' before 'list' for correct article usage. Added 'the' before 'phone' for proper preposition and article use.

× There is no need of paper and pen.

✓ There is no need for paper and pen.

The correct preposition after 'need' is 'for', not 'of'.

× And other than this it's also good if we need to add it that list, then we can easily add it because there are so many different kind of editing features in our phone and there are so many apps nowadays available in the phones like this to make nodes it's kind.

✓ And other than this, it's also good because if we need to add to that list, we can easily do so since there are many different kinds of editing features on our phones, and there are many apps nowadays available on phones like this to make notes.

Corrected 'add it that list' to 'add to that list' for proper preposition use. Changed 'different kind' to 'different kinds' to match plural. Changed 'in our phone' to 'on our phones' for correct preposition and plural. 'Make nodes' corrected to 'make notes'. Sentence restructured for clarity.