List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what to buy. This way, shopping becomes easier and more organised.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to explain why making lists helps you. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

Example: Yes, I always make a to-do list at the start of the day because I tend to forget tasks. This helps me keep track of what I need to complete and manage my time better.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by them. They believe lists reduce their creativity and make work less enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by unclear sentences and some vocabulary mistakes. Try to organise your answer clearly and use correct words. Use linking words to explain advantages of using a phone for lists.

Example: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient than paper. I always carry my phone, so I don't lose the list. Also, I can set reminders to help me complete tasks on time.

× it makes shopping much more easier and convenient

✓ it makes shopping much easier and more convenient

The word 'easier' is already a comparative adjective, so 'more' should not be used before it. Also, when comparing two qualities, 'much easier and more convenient' is the correct form to express the degree of both adjectives.

× Having a list in our hands makes us much more easy to work task and is easily accomplished

✓ Having a list in our hands makes it much easier to work on tasks and accomplish them easily

The phrase 'much more easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'much easier'. Also, 'work task' should be 'work on tasks' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× being a person who is he forgets everything is very much important

✓ being a person who forgets everything is very important

The phrase 'who is he forgets' is incorrect; the pronoun 'he' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence structure. The correct form is 'who forgets'.

× To make a list of my walk, I always make A to do this in the beginning of the day in order to remember each and every town set after form

✓ To make a list of my work, I always make a to-do list at the beginning of the day in order to remember each and every task

The word 'walk' is a typo and should be 'work'. 'A to do this' is incorrect; it should be 'a to-do list'. 'Town set after form' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'task' fits the context better.

× I get to know that which stars I have to complete it in a given time feeding

✓ I get to know which tasks I have to complete within a given time frame

'Stars' is a mishearing of 'tasks'. 'Feeding' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'time frame'. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× some people prefer to make less because they think they are bound to the such list and they even effective productivity

✓ some people prefer to make fewer lists because they think they are bound to such lists and it affects their productivity

'Make less' is incorrect; 'make fewer lists' is correct for countable nouns. 'The such list' is incorrect; 'such lists' is correct. 'They even effective productivity' is incorrect; it should be 'it affects their productivity'.

× So that's why people don't recommend to make list in order to work officially manfully

✓ So that's why people don't recommend making lists in order to work efficiently and effectively

'Recommend to make list' is incorrect; the correct form is 'recommend making lists'. 'Officially manfully' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'efficiently and effectively' fits the context.

× I prefer to make a list on a mobile phone because it is much more convenient and easy paper

✓ I prefer to make a list on a mobile phone because it is much more convenient and easier than paper

'Easy paper' is incorrect; the comparative adjective 'easier' should be used with 'than paper' to make a proper comparison.

× It can be easily lost, but we carry up while close to each and every case

✓ It can be easily lost, but we carry it with us everywhere

'Carry up while close to each and every case' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'carry it with us everywhere' to express the idea clearly.

× With gold, it's also even easier to create a tool less and we can even set alarms and timers in order to accomplish a task

✓ With a phone, it's also even easier to create a to-do list and we can even set alarms and timers in order to accomplish a task

'With gold' is a mishearing of 'with phone'. 'Tool less' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to-do list'.