List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如动词形式错误（making应为make），句子结构不够清晰，且表达重复。建议注意动词时态和形式的正确使用，简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: I didn't usually make a shopping list a long time ago because I thought I could remember everything. However, I found it difficult to remember all the items I needed, so now I usually make a list before shopping. This helps me remember everything more easily.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不够连贯，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的动词形式，避免口语化的表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并明确说明做清单的效果。

Example: It might sound a bit unusual, but I usually make a list before going to work or study. I find it important to schedule my tasks and remember what I need to do. Therefore, making a list is a very good habit for me.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误和表达不清晰，句子断断续续，缺少连贯性。建议练习完整句子表达，使用连接词，避免重复和语法错误，明确表达观点。

Example: I can understand why some people don't like making lists. For example, they might not have much work to do, or they prefer to work more freely without strict schedules. Therefore, they may find lists unnecessary.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用正确的动词形式，避免口语化表达，补充完整的理由，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Example: Personally, I prefer making lists on paper because using paper and pencil helps me remember my tasks better. However, I find it harder to remember things when I use my phone for lists, so paper works better for me.

× I didn't usually making a shopping list along time ago because I thought I can remember everything, but after that I found it's very difficult to remember.

✓ I didn't usually make a shopping list a long time ago because I thought I could remember everything, but after that I found it's very difficult to remember.

这里的'didn't'是助动词，后面应该接动词原形，所以'making'应改为'make'。另外，'a long time ago'是固定表达，不能写成'along time ago'。

× I thought I can remember everything, but after that I found it's very difficult to remember.

✓ I thought I could remember everything, but after that I found it's very difficult to remember.

过去时态中，情态动词'can'应使用过去式'could'，表示过去的能力或可能性。

× so after that I usually making a list before I go to shopping.

✓ so after that I usually make a list before I go shopping.

'usually'后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词'making'。此外，'go to shopping'应改为'go shopping'，因为'go shopping'是固定搭配。

× It's more easier for me to remember everything.

✓ It's easier for me to remember everything.

'more easier'是重复比较级，'easier'本身就是比较级，前面不需要加'more'。

× I usually making a list before I go to work or before I go to my study because I think that's really important for me to schedule a date.

✓ I usually make a list before I go to work or before I go to my study because I think that's really important for me to schedule a date.

'usually'后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词'making'。

× Or to remember what do I have to do in my work?

✓ Or to remember what I have to do in my work?

间接疑问句中不需要倒装，'what do I have to do'应改为'what I have to do'。

× To making a list.

✓ To make a list.

'to'后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词'making'。

× they don't like to making lists because.

✓ they don't like making lists because.

'like'后面接动词时，'to'和动名词都可以，但这里应去掉'to'，用'making'。

× Probably they don't have too many work to do or they are more tend to be more freedom more freely to do in their work.

✓ Probably they don't have too much work to do or they tend to be freer to do their work more freely.

'work'是不可数名词，不能用'too many'，应改为'too much'。'more tend'重复，应改为'tend'。'more freedom'应改为'freer'，'more freely'位置调整。

× So I think that's the reason why they don't like making less.

✓ So I think that's the reason why they don't like making lists.

'less'用法错误，应为'lists'，表示'清单'。

× I tend to making a list on paper because I think to use paper and pencil it's more easier to remember what things I have to do.

✓ I tend to make a list on paper because I think using paper and pencil makes it easier to remember what things I have to do.

'tend to'后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词'making'。'to use'改为'using'更自然。'more easier'重复比较级，应改为'easier'。

× it's more easier to remember what things I have to do.

✓ it's easier to remember what things I have to do.

'more easier'是重复比较级，'easier'本身就是比较级，前面不需要加'more'。

× But to remember things in your phone, I think sometimes it's not gonna work for me.

✓ But remembering things on your phone, I think sometimes it doesn't work for me.

'to remember'改为动名词形式'memembering'更符合句意。'gonna'是口语，正式表达用'doesn't work'。

× But to remember things in your phone, I think sometimes it's not gonna work for me.

✓ But remembering things on your phone, I think sometimes it doesn't work for me.

'in your phone'应改为'on your phone'，表示在手机上。