List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, say "I usually don't make a list when I shop, but I keep in mind what I need and some alternatives."

Example: I usually don't make a list when I shop, but I keep in mind what I need and some alternatives in case the items are unavailable.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. For example, "Yes, I make a list for work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks on time."

Example: Yes, I make a list for work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks on time. Moreover, it allows me to prepare myself better for each task.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear words. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and provide specific reasons with linking words. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary or boring, and they may prefer to rely on memory."

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary or boring, and they may prefer to rely on memory instead.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I used to make lists on paper when I was in school, but now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient and always with me."

Example: I used to make lists on paper when I was in school, but now I prefer using my phone because it's more convenient and always with me.

× I don't usually make a list when I shop, but I do keep things prepared in my mind as of what do I need, what is necessary and what is for the alternative option.

✓ I don't usually make a list when I shop, but I do keep things prepared in my mind about what I need, what is necessary and what is the alternative option.

The phrase 'as of what do I need' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'about' and the sentence structure should be declarative, not interrogative. So, 'about what I need' is correct instead of 'as of what do I need'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I do make a list for work and it works as so I need to complete those tasks on time and I have to be and how to be prepared myself and how to be prepared to be on time and complete those tasks on time.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for work and it works because I need to complete those tasks on time and I have to prepare myself to be on time and complete those tasks.

The phrase 'it works as so' is incorrect; 'because' is the appropriate conjunction here. Also, 'I have to be and how to be prepared myself' is awkward and ungrammatical. It should be 'I have to prepare myself'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Some people don't like making list as it might be UN useful for them or they might be there very lazy enough to make a list.

✓ Some people don't like making lists as it might be unuseful for them or they might be too lazy to make a list.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' after 'making' because it refers to the general act of making lists. Also, 'there very lazy enough' is incorrect; it should be 'too lazy'. 'Unuseful' is not a standard word; 'useless' or 'not useful' is better, but here 'unuseful' is retained as per original intent.

× Some people don't like making list as it might be UN useful for them or they might be there very lazy enough to make a list. The find it very boating or it is not essential for them.

✓ Some people don't like making lists as it might be unuseful for them or they might be too lazy to make a list. They find it very boring or it is not essential for them.

'The find' is a typo and should be 'They find'. 'Boating' is incorrect; the correct word is 'boring'. Also, 'there very lazy enough' should be 'too lazy'. These corrections fix pronoun misuse and spelling errors.

× Oh, when I was in school, I used to make list on paper, but now as we also have advanced technologies, I make list on my phone as it is very easily accessible and I don't need to carry it with me every time when I step out of my house.

✓ Oh, when I was in school, I used to make lists on paper, but now as we also have advanced technologies, I make lists on my phone as they are very easily accessible and I don't need to carry them with me every time I step out of my house.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' after 'make' because it refers to the general act of making lists. Also, 'it is very easily accessible' should be 'they are very easily accessible' to agree with the plural 'lists'. Similarly, 'carry it' should be 'carry them' to match plural. These corrections ensure subject-verb and pronoun agreement.