List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "not for get" and "avoids me of buying." Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

Example: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the necessary items and saves time. Moreover, it prevents me from buying things I don't need.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical mistakes, such as "make your list" instead of "make a list" and awkward phrasing like "do the things in the best way." Try to use clearer and more natural sentences, and include linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work, especially when I have many tasks. It helps me focus and complete my work efficiently, which saves me time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrasing, such as "the others believe they can trust on their memory." Try to clarify your ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

Example: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious and time-consuming. Instead, they prefer to focus directly on tasks, trusting their memory to keep track of what needs to be done.

Suggestion: Your answer contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as "on a paper" and "remember things best and. Save my time." Try to use more natural expressions and complete sentences. Also, explain your reasons clearly and use linking words for coherence.

Example: I prefer to make lists on paper because using a phone in public can be risky, and I might lose it. Writing things down helps me remember better and saves time.

× Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it really helps me to not for get necessary items and also saves me time.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it really helps me not to forget necessary items and also saves me time.

The phrase 'to not for get' is incorrect. The correct form is 'not to forget' because the infinitive verb 'to forget' should not be split by 'not'. Also, 'forget' was misspelled as 'for get'. The correct structure is 'helps me not to forget'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Additionally, it avoids me of buying items that I don't want.

✓ Additionally, it prevents me from buying items that I don't want.

The phrase 'avoids me of buying' is incorrect. The verb 'avoid' is not used with 'me' as an object in this way. Instead, 'prevent' is the correct verb here, and it is followed by 'me from' plus the gerund form. So, 'prevents me from buying' is the correct expression.

× Yes, I make your list for my work, especially when I have a lot of tasks to do.

✓ Yes, I make my list for my work, especially when I have a lot of tasks to do.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to their own list, not the listener's. The correct possessive pronoun is 'my' to indicate ownership by the speaker.

× It's really efficient for me because I can focus on my work and do the things in the best way and also save me time.

✓ It's really efficient for me because I can focus on my work, do things in the best way, and also save time.

The sentence uses 'and' twice unnecessarily, causing awkwardness. Also, 'save me time' should be 'save time' because 'save' here does not require an object pronoun. The corrected sentence uses commas and 'and' properly to list actions and removes the unnecessary pronoun.

× Some people don't like making lists because they think it's tedious and time consuming. So they prefer to spend time on completing tasks the others believe they can trust on their memory.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it's tedious and time-consuming. So they prefer to spend time completing tasks; others believe they can trust their memory.

The original sentence is a run-on and has awkward phrasing. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. 'Prefer to spend time on completing tasks' is better as 'prefer to spend time completing tasks'. The phrase 'the others believe they can trust on their memory' is incorrect; it should be 'others believe they can trust their memory' without 'on'. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× I prefer to make a list on a paper because I think it's really dangerous to use a phone in a public and also it could be risky to lose it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think it's really dangerous to use a phone in public, and also it could be risky to lose it.

The article 'a' before 'paper' and 'public' is incorrect. 'Paper' in this context is uncountable and does not need an article. 'Public' as a noun meaning 'public places' is also used without an article. Additionally, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses.

× So I prefer to write it down to remember things best and. Save my time.

✓ So I prefer to write it down to remember things better and save my time.

The original sentence is fragmented with a period after 'and' causing a sentence fragment. 'Remember things best' is awkward; 'remember things better' is more natural. Also, 'save my time' is acceptable but 'save time' is more common. The corrected sentence combines the ideas properly and improves clarity.