List— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct small grammar mistakes such as 'make list' to 'make a list'.

Example: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the important household items I need. This way, I don't forget anything and avoid spending money on unnecessary things.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use proper sentence structure and linking words like 'so that' to explain reasons clearly. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Example: Yes, I make a list for my work every day so that I don't forget important tasks. This helps me complete my work on time and improve my performance.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly to connect ideas. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same point.

Example: Some people don't like making lists because they can easily remember their tasks. Also, they find carrying a list inconvenient, so they prefer to rely on memory.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has incomplete sentences and grammar mistakes. Use complete sentences and linking words like 'because' to explain your preference clearly. Avoid fragmented sentences and ensure your ideas flow logically.

Example: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me and it's hard to lose. Unlike paper, my phone helps me keep my notes safe and accessible.

× Yes, I do usually make list when I go shopping so that I can remember what things that I need to buy and are important for me in my daily household commodities so that I won't miss anything an the things might be useful for me in the future.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping so that I can remember the things that I need to buy and that are important for me in my daily household commodities so that I won't miss anything and the things might be useful for me in the future.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it needs the article 'a'. Also, 'what things that I need' is incorrect; it should be 'the things that I need' to specify particular items. 'An' is a typo and should be 'and'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And I do not spend anymore small amount in other things.

✓ And I do not spend any more small amounts on other things.

The phrase 'anymore small amount' is incorrect. 'Any more' should be two words when referring to quantity, and 'small amount' should be pluralized to 'small amounts' to match the context. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to spending money.

× Yes I do make list for my work and yes it usually work as I make my daily schedule what I have to complete in my work so that I do not for get any of those least an my important.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work and yes, it usually works as I make my daily schedule of what I have to complete in my work so that I do not forget any of those lists and my important tasks.

'List' is singular and countable, so it needs the article 'a'. 'It usually work' should be 'it usually works' to agree with the singular subject. 'For get' is a typo and should be 'forget'. 'Least' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists'. These corrections fix singular/plural and verb agreement errors.

× Topics that I have to complete before my work schedule is completed so that I can get better pay.

✓ Topics that I have to complete before my work schedule is completed, so that I can get better pay.

A comma is needed before 'so that' to properly connect the clauses. This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Some people don't make list because they can easily remember the things that they want to get and the things that they are supposed to be done.

✓ Some people don't make lists because they can easily remember the things that they want to get and the things that they are supposed to do.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general concept of making lists. Also, 'are supposed to be done' is passive and awkward; 'are supposed to do' is more natural here.

× They easily remember those things so.

✓ They easily remember those things.

The word 'so' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing it makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× And also the burden of getting the list is also difficult for them, so they usually don't make list and remember the things that they have to be done by the time.

✓ Also, the burden of making the list is difficult for them, so they usually don't make lists and remember the things that they have to do by the time.

'Getting the list' is better expressed as 'making the list'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' (plural). 'Have to be done' is passive and awkward; 'have to do' is better. These changes improve preposition and verb usage.

× I prefer to make list on my phone rather than paper because I can easily lose an paper, but I can carry my phone everywhere and cannot lose the phone, so I can.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because I can easily lose a paper, but I can carry my phone everywhere and cannot lose it, so I can.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' (plural). 'An paper' is incorrect; it should be 'a paper'. Also, 'on paper' needs the preposition 'on'. 'Cannot lose the phone' is better as 'cannot lose it' to avoid repetition.

× Take notes on my phone and. And see what I remember. So the things that I can do will not.

✓ I can take notes on my phone and see what I remember, so the things that I can do will not be forgotten.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. Combining them into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.