Part 1
Examiner
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidate
Yes, I will sometimes if I need to buy a lot of stuff out, must make at least to try to making myself don't forgot the important stuff.
Examiner
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidate
Yes, I like to make a list for my work because there's a lot of. Works in my daily life if I don't write them down. Sometimes I will forgot so I will write them down and try to finish.
Examiner
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidate
STS. I think. Every people have the different different option so some people may think making lease is not. Come football, or they're lazy or they have different style of work.
Examiner
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidate
Actually I do both. If I have a paper nearby I will make a lease on it, but if I don't have paper an eye. Have to write it down at that time I will. Make the list in my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 你的回答表达不够清晰,语法错误较多,建议简化句子结构,确保语法正确,同时避免重复表达。可以先直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体说明为什么会做购物清单。
Example: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list when I need to buy many items. It helps me remember important things and avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中断断续续,语法和表达不够连贯。建议先明确回答问题,然后用连贯的句子说明做工作清单的原因和效果,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Example: Yes, I like to make lists for my work because I have many tasks every day. If I don't write them down, I sometimes forget. So, making lists helps me remember and complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答内容混乱且不连贯,词汇使用错误较多。建议先明确表达观点,使用正确的词汇和句子结构,给出具体原因并用连接词连接观点。
Example: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously. Others might find it boring or feel that lists limit their flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,建议简化句子,确保语法正确,逻辑清晰,直接表达偏好并说明原因。
Example: Actually, I use both paper and my phone to make lists. If I have paper nearby, I write on it. Otherwise, I use my phone to make a list immediately.
× Yes, I will sometimes if I need to buy a lot of stuff out, must make at least to try to making myself don't forgot the important stuff.
✓ Yes, I sometimes will if I need to buy a lot of stuff, I must at least try to make myself not forget the important stuff.
句中“must make at least to try to making”结构混乱,modal动词must后应接动词原形,且“making”应为动词原形“make”,同时“don't forgot”应为“not forget”。建议理清句子结构,使用正确的情态动词和动词形式。
× Yes, I like to make a list for my work because there's a lot of. Works in my daily life if I don't write them down.
✓ Yes, I like to make a list for my work because there are a lot of tasks in my daily life if I don't write them down.
句中“there's a lot of. Works”中“Works”应为复数名词“tasks”或“work items”,且“there's”应改为“there are”以匹配复数。注意单复数一致性。
× Sometimes I will forgot so I will write them down and try to finish.
✓ Sometimes I will forget, so I write them down and try to finish.
“will forgot”中“forgot”为过去式,情态动词will后应接动词原形“forget”。同时根据上下文,使用一般现在时更合适。
× Every people have the different different option so some people may think making lease is not.
✓ Every person has a different opinion, so some people may think making lists is not necessary.
“Every people”应为“Every person”,因为every后接单数名词;“different different option”重复且“option”应为复数“opinions”;“making lease”应为“making lists”。注意单复数和词汇拼写。
× Come football, or they're lazy or they have different style of work.
✓ Maybe they are lazy or have a different style of work.
“Come football”无意义,应删除或改正;“they have different style”中“style”应为单数“a different style”,且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子表达。
× If I have a paper nearby I will make a lease on it, but if I don't have paper an eye.
✓ If I have paper nearby, I will make a list on it, but if I don't have paper on me,
“a lease”应为“a list”;“an eye”应为“on me”,表示“身边有纸”。注意代词和固定搭配的正确使用。
× Have to write it down at that time I will. Make the list in my phone.
✓ I have to write it down at that time, so I will make the list on my phone.
句子结构混乱,“Have to write it down at that time I will.”不完整,应调整为完整句子,连接词“so”使句意连贯。