Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one brief reason, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words if adding details. Focus on natural phrasing (e.g., "I'm not really a fan of singing; I prefer dancing") and correct articles and word forms.

Example: I'm not really a fan of singing; I prefer dancing instead. I enjoy dancing because it helps me express myself physically and stay fit, so I usually choose it over singing.

Suggestion: Give a concise, grammatically correct answer with one or two supporting details. Use correct tense and article use. Avoid repeating phrases like "even" and "at the present time."

Example: No, I haven't learned to sing formally. I didn't have the opportunity as a child, and so far I haven't taken any singing lessons.

Suggestion: Respond directly with a clear topic sentence and a brief reason. Use natural phrasing (e.g., "I haven't really thought about it, but...") and avoid awkward constructions like "related to it."

Example: I haven't really thought about it, but if I had to choose, I'd probably sing for my partner because it would be a personal and meaningful gesture.

Suggestion: Use clearer, more natural vocabulary and avoid informal or vague expressions like "give them a kick." State your opinion directly and support it with a reason and an example. Use linking words such as "however" correctly.

Example: I think singing can bring happiness to many people, especially fans and performers, because it helps them express emotions and bond with others. However, people who dislike singing may not feel the same joy.

Suggestion: Make the answer more concise and organize details with linking words. Mention one or two specific examples and why you enjoy them. Correct redundancies like "in my life" and word order.

Example: Yes, I enjoy listening to singers like Arijit Singh because his voice is very expressive. I also like listening to a friend of mine who has a melodious voice; her singing is relaxing and inspiring.

Suggestion: Keep the answer focused: state whether you took classes, then give one specific supporting detail. Avoid long, run-on sentences and use correct past tense forms. Use linking words like "however" appropriately and limit to two or three sentences.

Example: No, I haven't taken formal singing classes. However, in college some students practiced for a singing competition outside my classroom, and occasionally I joined their practice sessions.

× No, I am not quite admirer of singing, however I do prefer dancing rather single.

✓ No, I am not quite an admirer of singing; however, I prefer dancing rather than singing.

Missing article 'an' before 'admirer' and incorrect comparative phrase 'rather single'. Use 'rather than' to contrast two options. Also add a semicolon or comma for clarity. Suggestion: include necessary articles and use 'rather than' for comparisons.

× Frankly speaking, I even didn't get an opportunity in my childhood and even at the present time I didn't have such scope related to singing in my life.

✓ Frankly speaking, I didn't get an opportunity in my childhood, and even now I haven't had such a chance to pursue singing in my life.

Use simple past 'didn't get' for childhood, but for continuing lack up to present use present perfect 'haven't had' rather than 'didn't have' to show relevance to the present. 'Scope related to singing' is unnatural; use 'a chance to pursue singing.' Avoid repeating 'even' twice.

× I haven't given any thought related to it, but if I get a chance I would rather sing for my partner.

✓ I haven't given any thought to it, but if I get the chance I would rather sing for my partner.

Use the preposition 'to' with 'give thought to'. Use 'the chance' or 'a chance'; 'the chance' is natural here. Pronoun and determiner choice corrected.

× To my mind, this thing applies to those who are quite fan of singing, however those who don't like to sing such kind of things don't give them a kick.

✓ To my mind, this applies to those who are big fans of singing; however, those who don't like to sing are not interested in such things.

'Quite fan' should be 'big fans' or 'quite fans' is incorrect. 'This thing' is vague; use 'this'. 'Don't give them a kick' is idiomatic but informal and incorrectly phrased; replace with 'are not interested'. Ensure noun-verb agreement and clearer vocabulary.

× Yes, I love to listen to others especially the singers such as Arijit Singh and even in my life I do have my friend who sings very beautifully and she has a melodious voice so I love to listen to her sometimes.

✓ Yes, I love listening to others, especially singers such as Arijit Singh. In my life I also have a friend who sings very beautifully and has a melodious voice, so I love listening to her sometimes.

Use the gerund 'listening' after 'love'. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'singers'. Break into two sentences for clarity. 'Do have my friend' is awkward; use 'also have a friend'. Use consistent verb forms 'listening' rather than mixed forms.

× No, I didn't get any classes during my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't take any classes during my childhood.

While 'didn't get any classes' is understandable, 'take classes' is the correct collocation in English for attending classes. Use simple past 'didn't take' for completed past action.

× However, I do remember during my college days there was a batch who enrolled themselves for the singing competition and they used to practice just in front of my class and sometimes I got a chance to listen to them as well as to join them in the practice.

✓ However, I remember that during my college days there was a group who enrolled in the singing competition, and they used to practice right in front of my class. Sometimes I had a chance to listen to them and to join their practice.

'Batch' is incorrect for people in this context; use 'group'. 'Enrolled themselves for' should be 'enrolled in'. Use 'right in front of my class' rather than 'just in front'. 'I got a chance' is acceptable but 'I had a chance' fits narrative past better. 'Join them in the practice' -> 'join their practice' is more natural.