Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。用一到两句主题句说明是否喜欢，然后用一到两句具体细节支持（如如何建立自信、参加表演的经历）。避免多余或重复的信息，句子总数控制在五句以内。

Example: Yes, I love singing and that's why I majored in music education. Studying singing has helped me build confidence and make friends at university. I also enjoy performing on stage because it lets me express myself and connect with the audience.

Suggestion: 回答需更清晰说明学唱歌的频率和老师的作用。注意语法（主谓一致、时态）和词汇选择，避免不连贯的短语。使用连接词使信息更流畅，例如 because、so、and。

Example: Yes, I have. I take a singing class once a week at my school, and my teacher is very supportive. Because he often encourages students to perform, I have gained more confidence on stage.

Suggestion: 回答应直接说明想为谁唱（例如朋友、观众或线上观众），并给出具体原因。修正语法错误，使用清晰的连接词并避免模糊措辞（如 "see him in for"）。

Example: I prefer to sing for a live audience, whether in a theatre or online. I enjoy hearing the audience's applause because it makes me feel appreciated and motivated.

Suggestion: 回答要更简洁并提供相关具体例子。修正语法错误（完整句子、正确时态），说明原因并用一两个具体例子支持，但避免无关或难以理解的描述（如 "went to the sky"）。

Example: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because it helps reduce stress and lift the mood. For example, last weekend my friends and I sang together at a picnic, and it felt relaxing and joyful for everyone.

Suggestion: 回答要更礼貌和具体，避免贬低他人。可以说明偏好（专业歌手或特定风格）并给出理由和例子。注意语法和词序。

Example: I enjoy listening to professional singers because they usually have better technique and emotional expression. However, I also appreciate talented amateur singers, especially when they perform with passion.

Suggestion: 回答要更连贯并避免重复前面信息。直接说明是否上过歌唱课、课的频率或内容，并简要评价老师。注意人称和代词使用（例如 "I like her" 而不是 "I love she"）。

Example: Yes, I have taken singing classes as part of my music education. The classes focus on vocal technique and performance, and my teacher is very encouraging, which helped me feel more confident on stage.

× Study it can helped me build confidence and make new friends.

✓ Studying it can help me build confidence and make new friends.

原句混用了不定式/动名词结构和过去分词“helped”。根据语境应使用动名词短语“Studying it”（学习它/学习这门专业），并用情态动词“can”后接动词原形“help”。建议将“Study it”改为“Studying it”，并把“helped”改为“help”。

× I really prefer singing in so I chose my major in musical education.

✓ I really prefer singing, so I chose my major in musical education.

原句中“prefer singing in”使用了不必要或错误的介词“in”。“prefer”后直接接动名词或名词，不需要“in”。因此删除“in”，在两个分句之间加逗号与连词“so”。

× Have you ever learnt how to sing? Student: Sure, in our school, seeing class is once a week.

✓ Sure. At our school, singing class is once a week.

原句“seeing class”拼写或词形错误，应为“singing class”。另外固定表达是“At our school, ...”。需要用一般现在时描述习惯性事件“is once a week”。

× So I prefer my singing teacher.

✓ So I like my singing teacher.

“prefer”后通常比较两者或接动名词/名词短语，单独说“prefer my singing teacher”不自然。原意应为“我喜欢我的声乐老师”，用“like”更贴切。当比较时应写“prefer X to Y”。

× I think it is very friendly was more he often encouraged me to perform on stage.

✓ I think he is very friendly and often encouraged me to perform on stage.

原句有代词混乱与时态/连词错误。“it is very friendly”应改为“he is very friendly”。“was more”不是恰当连词，应使用“and”连接并将“often encouraged”置于过去时以匹配经历。

× Who do you want to sing for? Student: I want to see him in for public online because I usually prefer on stage especially when I heard audience clipe under applause which was very pleasant.

✓ I want to be seen by the public online because I usually prefer performing on stage, especially when I hear the audience clap and applaud, which is very pleasant.

原句代词和语态混乱：“want to see him in for public online”不通。应表达“想被大众在网上看到”即被动结构“be seen by the public online”。“prefer on stage”需改为“prefer performing on stage”。“heard audience clipe under applause”存在拼写错误和搭配错误，应为“hear the audience clap and applaud”。时态要与一般现在习惯保持一致。

× I think is a fantastic way to reduce pressure and stress.

✓ I think it is a fantastic way to reduce pressure and stress.

句子缺主语“it”。用于一般现在时的意见表达要完整："I think it is..."。加上“it”。

× Last Sunday I went to the sky with my friends which was very pleasant and relaxing so I enjoy singing together, which was very happy.

✓ Last Sunday I went to the park with my friends, which was very pleasant and relaxing, so we enjoyed singing together, which made us very happy.

原句“went to the sky”不合逻辑，应为“went to the park”等地名（根据常见表达改为park）。“so I enjoy”时态不一致，描述过去的活动应使用过去时“enjoyed”。“which was very happy”搭配错误，应为“which made us very happy”或“which was very enjoyable”。整体需要一致的过去时态和正确搭配。

× To be honest, I don't like ordinary people singing because I think they aren't professional enough and don't singing greater.

✓ To be honest, I don't like ordinary people singing because I think they aren't professional enough and don't sing as well.

“don't singing greater”语法错误：在否定句中动词要用原形“sing”。“greater”用法不当，应改为“sing as well”或“sing better”。因此改为“don't sing as well”。

× So I prefer listen to professional singers such as Gong Shuang.

✓ So I prefer to listen to professional singers such as Gong Shuang.

“prefer”后接动词时若后接动词不定式要用“prefer to do sth”或动名词“prefer doing”。原句缺不定式“to”。因此补上“to”。

× Sure, my major is music education. So in our school I have singing class. What's more? I think my music teacher is very friendly. She often encouraged me to perform on stage, so I love she.

✓ Sure, my major is music education. At our school I have singing classes. What's more, my music teacher is very friendly. She often encouraged me to perform on stage, so I like her.

原段存在句子结构和代词错误。“in our school I have singing class”改为“At our school I have singing classes”。“What's more?”后应接陈述，连接词用逗号。“I love she”代词格错误，应为“I like her”。此外保持名词复数“classes”更自然。