Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar, and add one specific supporting detail. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I love singing. I have enjoyed it since I was a child and I sing every day in my free time because it helps me relax and express myself.

Suggestion: Be direct and clear about whether you learned formal lessons or learned informally. Use correct tense and clearer vocabulary, and include a brief specific example of what you learned.

Example: Yes, I have learned singing informally by following tutorials on YouTube and TikTok. For example, I practised breathing techniques and vocal warm-ups I found in online lessons.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and explain with a specific reason. Improve grammar and reduce redundancy.

Example: I usually sing for myself because it feels like a reward after a long day. Singing helps me unwind and boosts my mood, so I treat it as personal time.

Suggestion: State your opinion clearly, use correct vocabulary, and give a concrete example of how singing reduces stress. Keep it concise and logical with a linking word.

Example: Yes, I think singing can make people happier. For example, when I sing in my free time I feel less stressed because it helps me focus on my breath and forget my worries.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and finish your sentence. Use correct pronouns and verb forms, and give a specific experience or feeling from listening to others.

Example: Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing, especially my friend who performs locally. I often go to her shows because I find her performances inspiring and entertaining.

Suggestion: Be concise and use correct past tense. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details about the class and its outcome.

Example: Yes, I took a two-month singing class when I was in middle school to improve my technique. After the course, I performed in a small school concert with my classmates.

× Absolutely yes. I very like singing and I always remember that I like singing since I was a little kid.

✓ Absolutely yes. I really like singing and I always remember that I have liked singing since I was a little kid.

'Very like' is incorrect in English; use the adverb 'really' before the verb 'like' (adverb placement). Also, when referring to a past starting point continuing to the present, use present perfect ('have liked') with 'since'. Suggestion: use 'really like' and 'have liked since' to show continuous feeling from past to present.

× I used to sing every day yeah in a free time or just singing is my hobby too.

✓ I used to sing every day in my free time; singing is my hobby too.

Replace 'a free time' with 'my free time' (article and noun choice) and separate ideas with proper punctuation. 'Used to' correctly indicates past habit. Suggestion: use 'in my free time' and a semicolon or short sentence to join related ideas.

× I think maybe yes because I was remembered that I used to learn singing when I was growing on TikTok or growing on the YouTube grills or maybe somewhere on social media.

✓ I think maybe yes because I remember that I used to learn singing while growing up on TikTok, YouTube, or other social media.

'Was remembered' is incorrect; use 'remember' for the present memory. 'Growing on' should be 'growing up on' to indicate childhood/adolescence and 'YouTube grills' is unclear—assumed 'YouTube'. Tense: use simple past habit 'used to' with 'remember' in present. Suggestion: use 'I remember that I used to learn...' and 'growing up on' for platform exposure.

× So by that I watched a lot of singing video and I was sort of very enjoyable.

✓ Because of that I watched a lot of singing videos and I enjoyed them a lot.

'Singing video' should be plural 'singing videos'. 'I was...enjoyable' is wrong because 'enjoyable' describes something that gives enjoyment; the speaker should say 'I enjoyed them' or 'I was very happy/enjoyed it'. Suggestion: use active verb 'enjoyed' and plural form for 'videos'.

× I think that the person that I want to sing for is myself because I think that this is a present for myself for took a long day to practice in school or some reason just for myself.

✓ I think the person I want to sing for is myself because this is a present to myself after long days of practicing at school or for other reasons; it's just for me.

Redundant and incorrect pronoun use ('that the person that') and awkward phrase 'present for myself for took a long day'. Use 'to myself' for gifts and correct tense 'after long days of practicing'. Suggestion: simplify structure and use 'after long days of practicing'.

× Absolutely yes, singing can bring tabiness to people because for example when sing when I sing it just remove the threads are just maybe in the free time, just a hobby, but they can feel very less stressful when you're singing.

✓ Absolutely yes, singing can bring happiness to people because, for example, when I sing it relieves stress; as a hobby in free time, it can make people feel much less stressed.

'Tabiness' and 'threads' are incorrect words—likely meant 'happiness' and 'tension/stress'. Sentence structure is confused; use 'relieves stress' or 'makes people feel less stressed'. Suggestion: replace incorrect words and restructure into clear clauses.

× Honestly, I have to say that absolutely guess I like listening to our singing.

✓ Honestly, I have to say that I absolutely like listening to others singing.

'Guess' is extraneous and 'our singing' should be 'others' singing' or 'other people singing'. Use 'others' to refer to other people. Suggestion: remove 'guess' and use 'others'.

× For example, I very like to listen to my friends because she is a singer and I've go to her shows and watch her singing.

✓ For example, I really like to listen to my friend because she is a singer and I go to her shows and watch her sing.

Use 'really like' (adverb placement) not 'very like'. 'Friends' plural conflicts with 'she'; use 'friend' singular if referring to one. 'I've go' is incorrect—use 'I go' or 'I've gone' depending on meaning. 'Watch her singing' is better as 'watch her sing'. Suggestion: ensure pronoun-number agreement and correct verb forms.

× I always remember when I was studying in the middle class.

✓ I always remember when I was studying in middle school.

'Middle class' is incorrect for 'middle school'. Use 'was studying in middle school' to refer to education period. Tense 'remember' is present, referring to past period—acceptable. Suggestion: use correct noun 'middle school'.

× I've taken a singing class for two months just to improve my singing skills and I remember that after that class I have a little concert in the school with my friends and yeah that's the reason that I have a taking a singing class.

✓ I took a singing class for two months to improve my singing skills, and I remember that after that class I had a small concert at school with my friends. That's why I took the singing class.

Use simple past 'I took' for completed action. 'I have a little concert' should be 'I had a small concert' and 'in the school' -> 'at school'. Final clause 'I have a taking a singing class' is ungrammatical; use 'That's why I took the singing class.' Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past events and correct article use ('a small concert').