Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류와 반복이 있습니다. 먼저 주제 문장으로 직접 답한 뒤에 이유를 하나 또는 두 개의 간결한 문장으로 덧붙이세요. 어법(예: "I'm not really a big fan of"), 시제/관용구(예: "I don't use to" → "I don't usually")와 중복 단어 제거에 신경 쓰세요. 또한 직업(프로듀서)을 언급할 때는 그와 관련된 간단한 이유를 덧붙이면 답변이 더 풍부해집니다.

Example: I'm not really a big fan of singing because I don't usually sing. However, I enjoy creating songs instead, since I'm a producer and I focus more on composing and arranging music.

Suggestion: 간단하고 직접적인 답변이지만 동사의 형태와 시제 오류("never try" → "have never tried")가 있습니다. 가능성을 말할 때는 조건절을 명확히 하고 이유를 구체적으로 제시하세요. linking word(예: "but", "because")는 적절히 사용되었으나 문장 연결을 더 매끄럽게 하세요.

Example: I haven't tried to learn singing yet, but I would like to if I get the chance because I want to use my own voice for the songs I produce.

Suggestion: 답변은 명확하지만 반복과 어색한 표현("show my show")이 있습니다. 같은 의미의 어구 반복을 피하고 구체적인 상황이나 이유(예: 라이브 공연, 스트리밍)를 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다. 문장은 2~3개로 간결하게 유지하세요.

Example: I would like to sing for my audience and my fans. I want to include my voice in my recordings and showcase my performance during live shows to connect with them.

Suggestion: 의견은 분명하지만 문장이 길고 반복("and" 중복, 'share' 반복)되어 산만합니다. 한두 개의 구체적 근거(예: 공동체 느낌, 스트레스 해소, 감정 전달)를 들어 간결하게 설명하세요. 연결어를 사용해 논리성을 높이세요.

Example: Absolutely. Singing can bring happiness because it helps people express emotions and release stress. Also, when I sing, I can share my energy and feelings with the audience, which creates a positive atmosphere.

Suggestion: 전달은 되지만 반복("listen listen", "a lot" 여러번)과 문법 오류("others singing" → "others sing" 또는 "other people sing")가 있습니다. 직업 관련 이유를 구체적으로 예시(어떤 종류의 노래에서 영감 받는지)로 보강하면 좋습니다.

Example: Yes. As a producer, I listen to other singers for inspiration, especially vocal techniques and arrangement ideas, because that helps me develop new concepts for my own songs.

Suggestion: 짧고 이해되지만 문법(대문자와 연결부호 사용, 시제 일관성)과 표현을 다듬어야 합니다. 이유(시간 부족)를 말할 때는 과거와 현재 관련 시제를 명확히 하고, 구체적으로 언제 배우고 싶은지 또는 어떤 부분을 배우고 싶은지 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Example: No, I've never taken singing classes, but I want to in the future. I believe lessons would improve the quality of my songs, especially my vocal control and pitch, but I haven't had time until now.

× I'm not really big fan of singing because I don't use to sing a lot.

✓ I'm not really a big fan of singing because I don't usually sing a lot.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'big fan' and uses incorrect verb phrase 'use to' for habitual present. Use 'a' for singular count noun and 'usually' to indicate habitual action: 'I'm not really a big fan of singing because I don't usually sing a lot.' Suggestion: add 'a' before 'big fan' and replace 'don't use to' with 'don't usually'.

× I love to instead instead singing, I love to make a song.

✓ Instead of singing, I love to make songs.

The original mixes infinitive and -ing forms awkwardly and repeats 'instead'. Use the prepositional phrase 'instead of' followed by a gerund 'singing'. Also pluralize 'songs' for natural expression: 'Instead of singing, I love to make songs.' Suggestion: use 'instead of' + gerund and pluralize when speaking generally.

× I'm a producer

✓ I'm a producer.

This is a fragment missing punctuation in the transcript; grammatically it's acceptable but need a period. No tense or agreement error. Suggestion: include proper punctuation: 'I'm a producer.'

× Not really. I never try to learn how to sing, but if I have a chance I want to try it because I want to use my voice when I make my own song

✓ Not really. I never tried to learn how to sing, but if I have a chance I want to try because I want to use my voice when I make my own songs.

When referring to past completed actions, use the past tense 'tried' instead of present 'try'. Also 'make my own song' should be plural 'songs' for generality and 'try it' can be simplified to 'try'. Suggestion: use past tense for past actions and pluralize 'songs' when general.

× I want to put my voice on my songs and I want to show my show to my fans while I'm performing.

✓ I want to put my voice on my songs and show my performance to my fans while I'm performing.

Repeated 'I want to' is acceptable but 'show my show' is incorrect; use 'performance' as the noun. Also streamlining to avoid repetition improves clarity. Suggestion: replace 'show my show' with 'show my performance'.

× Absolutely. I think singing can bring happiness and also singing can share all the emotions and and share what I'm thinking right now and also and my energy I can share my energy with people

✓ Absolutely. I think singing can bring happiness and share emotions, thoughts, and my energy with people.

The original is repetitive and unorganized: multiple 'and' and duplicated 'share'. Condense into a parallel list: 'share emotions, thoughts, and my energy'. Suggestion: use parallel structure and avoid repeated conjunctions.

× Of course I'm a producer and sometimes I really need a lot of inspirations so I try to listen listen a lot of songs that others singing that really helps me a lot.

✓ Of course. I'm a producer, and sometimes I really need a lot of inspiration, so I try to listen to a lot of songs that others sing; that really helps me a lot.

Use 'inspiration' as an uncountable noun (not 'inspirations'), add comma and conjunctions correctly, use 'listen to' with 'to', and change 'others singing' to 'others sing' or 'others are singing'. Also remove duplicate 'listen'. Suggestion: use 'inspiration' (uncountable), include 'to' after 'listen', and use simple present 'sing' for the relative clause.

× Never But I want to try it. I know if I learn how to sing, I can develop my own song quality, but I didn't have enough time to learn.

✓ Never, but I want to try it. I know if I learn how to sing, I can develop the quality of my songs, but I haven't had enough time to learn.

Use present perfect 'haven't had' to indicate up to now lack of time; 'song quality' is awkward—use 'the quality of my songs'. Also add comma after 'Never'. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences or lack up to the present and rephrase noun phrases for naturalness.