Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Correct tense and articles, and avoid filler sounds like 'uh'.

Example: Yes, I have enjoyed singing since childhood. I often sing while playing the guitar because it helps me express my emotions; moreover, I find that melody can convey feelings more powerfully than words.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then add concise detail about when and what you learned. Use correct phrasing such as 'private lessons' and remove fillers. Use linking words like 'however' or 'and'.

Example: Yes, I can sing, and I took private singing lessons in high school. My teacher gave me one-to-one classes to help me improve my vocal technique and range.

Suggestion: Be clearer and organize your answer: state who you'd like to sing for and give a specific reason. Avoid unclear phrases and repetitions. If mentioning a band or idol, name them correctly and explain why they matter to you.

Example: I would like to sing for large audiences worldwide, but especially for my favourite band, MFÖ, because they inspired me to pursue music and I want to show my appreciation for their songs.

Suggestion: Answer directly and expand with a clear example and a linking word. Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'lift my mood' instead of 'off the mode') and correct grammar.

Example: Yes, singing can evoke both happiness and sadness. For example, when I'm feeling down I play the guitar and sing; this lifts my mood and makes me feel more energized.

Suggestion: Give a straightforward answer and clarify with one specific detail. Use correct verbs and pronouns (e.g., 'join in' rather than 'attend him or her'). Avoid redundancy and long hesitations.

Example: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing, and often I like to join in. If I hear someone singing a song I know, I usually sing along with them.

Suggestion: Respond directly, then give brief specific details about when and why you took the class. Use past tense consistently and concise phrasing.

Example: Yes, I took singing classes in high school because my teacher noticed my musical talent and wanted to help me improve my vocal skills.

× I like singing since my childhood.

✓ I have liked singing since my childhood.

The sentence expresses an action that started in the past and continues to the present, so the present perfect tense ('have liked') is required instead of simple present ('like'). Use 'since' with present perfect to show duration from a past point to now.

× I'm singing and playing guitar.

✓ I sing and play the guitar.

When describing habitual activities or general abilities, use the simple present ('sing', 'play') rather than present continuous ('I'm singing') which suggests an action happening right now. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'guitar' when referring to playing the instrument in general.

× I like singing because singing is help me to express my feelings and I think the songs and the melody is stronger than the words.

✓ I like singing because it helps me to express my feelings, and I think the songs and the melody are stronger than the words.

'Help' needs third person singular agreement 'helps' when the subject is 'it' or 'singing'. Use 'it' to avoid repetition. 'The songs and the melody' is a plural subject, so use 'are' not 'is'. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× I already know how to sing, but I recognize that in high school, umm, my music teacher gave me a individual singing, uh, music class to help me improve my, umm, singing skills.

✓ I already knew how to sing, but I remember that in high school my music teacher gave me an individual singing class to help me improve my singing skills.

When referring to a past time ('in high school'), use past tense ('knew', 'remembered' or 'remember'). 'Recognize' is more natural as 'remember' in this context. Use the article 'an' before 'individual' and place 'singing' next to 'class' as a single noun phrase. Remove filler words for clarity.

× I would like to sing for many people in the world, but I think the most important person to sing for me is uh efficient in crush crush is a Turkish boy band and I my bias is efficient so I.

✓ I would like to sing for many people around the world, but the most important people for me are the members of Efficient; Efficient is a Turkish boy band and my bias is a member of Efficient.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and fragments. 'People in the world' -> 'people around the world' sounds natural. The phrase about the band is fragmented and repeats 'crush crush' and 'efficient' incorrectly. Clarify by naming the band and using 'my bias' to refer to a favorite member. Ensure subject and verb completeness.

× Yes, it can bring happiness and also sadness to people.

✓ Yes, it can bring happiness and also sadness to people.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable as written. It correctly uses modal 'can' to express ability and a parallel noun phrase. No change needed.

× For example I always play guitar when I'm off the mode and it help me to feel more happy and energized.

✓ For example, I always play the guitar when I'm in a bad mood, and it helps me feel happier and more energized.

Use 'play the guitar' for the instrument. 'Off the mode' is incorrect; the idiom is 'in a bad mood'. 'Help' requires third person singular 'helps' because 'it' is the subject. Use comparative/adverb forms: 'feel happier' and 'more energized'.

× I like listening to others singing, but most of the time if I heard someone singing I would like to attend him or her and I would like to sing together the song that his or she is being sing singing so.

✓ I like listening to others sing, but most of the time if I hear someone singing I would like to join them and sing the song together.

Use 'listen to others sing' (bare infinitive after 'listen to'). Match tense: 'if I hear' for general conditional, not 'heard'. 'Attend him or her' is incorrect; use 'join them'. Replace awkward phrase with 'sing the song together'. Remove redundant words and correct verb forms.

× Yes, I did take a singing class in high school my teacher gave me because she thought I have a special talent for the music and the art and she wanted to help me to improve my skills.

✓ Yes, I took a singing class in high school that my teacher gave me because she thought I had a special talent for music and art, and she wanted to help me improve my skills.

Use simple past 'took' rather than 'did take' in this narrative. Use past 'had' for the teacher's belief in the past. 'For the music and the art' -> 'for music and art' (no articles). 'Help me improve' is more natural than 'help me to improve' though both are acceptable.