Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your sentences concise. For example, instead of repeating 'express', you can say how singing helps you convey emotions effectively.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it allows me to express my emotions and feelings. Moreover, singing different songs can have a strong impact on people by conveying various moods and stories.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to organize your answer logically and provide specific details about your learning experience.

Example: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a kid by practicing karaoke. My dad taught me and my siblings the basics, including how to pronounce the words correctly in the lyrics.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why you want to sing for your parents.

Example: I want to sing for my parents because they have always been very supportive of my singing. They enjoy listening to me and often ask me to sing, which makes me happy and motivates me to keep improving.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by using correct grammar and linking words. Be specific about how singing can evoke different emotions and bring happiness.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings. Through different songs, singing can evoke various emotions, such as joy or sadness, which helps people feel better.

× One of my hobbies would be singing.

✓ One of my hobbies is singing.

The phrase 'would be' is incorrect here because it suggests a conditional or hypothetical situation. The correct form is 'is' to indicate a current fact. Use the verb 'is' to link the subject and the complement properly.

× specially express him themselves.

✓ especially express themselves.

The phrase 'express him themselves' is incorrect because it mixes pronouns improperly. 'Themselves' is the correct reflexive pronoun to refer back to 'a person'. 'Him' is unnecessary and causes confusion.

× My dad also teach us, me and my siblings, how to say.

✓ My dad also taught us, me and my siblings, how to sing.

The verb 'teach' should be in the past tense 'taught' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'how to say' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'how to sing'.

× They carry OK.

✓ They carried on OK.

The phrase 'They carry OK' is unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely 'They carried on OK', meaning they continued or managed well. Correct verb form and phrase needed.

× I'm going up there very supportive with me in singing.

✓ They are very supportive of me in singing.

The original sentence misuses 'I'm going up there' which is unclear and incorrect. The intended meaning is that 'They are very supportive of me'. Also, 'supportive with me' should be 'supportive of me'.

× They always love to hear me saying.

✓ They always love to hear me sing.

The verb 'saying' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'sing' to match the context. Also, 'hear me sing' is the correct structure rather than 'hear me saying'.

× They always request me to sing to them an.

✓ They always request me to sing to them.

The word 'an' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect. The sentence should end after 'them'.

× and really makes me happy and continuously.

✓ and it really makes me happy continuously.

The adverb 'continuously' is misplaced and the sentence lacks a subject for 'makes'. Adding 'it' as subject and placing 'continuously' after 'happy' improves clarity and grammar.

× some singing is.

✓ singing is.

The phrase 'some singing is' is incomplete and unclear. Removing 'some' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× Actually seeing that we were able to give different modes like happy or sad.

✓ Actually, singing allows us to express different moods like happy or sad.

The original sentence is unclear and uses 'seeing' incorrectly. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper verbs and nouns.

× And I think that they're saying it really brings various emotions such as happiness.

✓ And I think that singing really brings various emotions such as happiness.

The phrase 'they're saying it' is incorrect and confusing. The intended subject is 'singing'. Replacing 'they're saying it' with 'singing' corrects the sentence.