Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên hơn. Hãy chú ý đến cấu trúc câu và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trở nên dễ hiểu và logic hơn.

Example: Yes, I love singing because it is a great way to express my emotions and inner thoughts. When I was a child, I often sang to entertain myself. Singing also helps me relax and relieve stress during difficult times.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'not call with the singing'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

Example: No, I have never taken any singing lessons. However, when I was a child, I learned to play the piano. I didn't learn singing because I was not confident in my vocal abilities.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi từ vựng. Hãy bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Although I am not confident in my singing skills, I would like to sing for my close friends and family because their support gives me the courage to perform.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý tưởng đã nói trước đó và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung các chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động và thuyết phục hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and relax. For those who have stressful jobs, singing can be a great way to relieve tension and enjoy themselves.

× I feel like singing is one of the best way to express your emotions as well as your inner thoughts and a vocal way.

✓ I feel like singing is one of the best ways to express your emotions as well as your inner thoughts and a vocal way.

The phrase 'one of the best way' is incorrect because 'one of the' should be followed by a plural noun. Therefore, 'way' should be pluralized to 'ways'.

× I use this thing a lot when I was a little kid at a find this thing to be extremely entertaining.

✓ I used this thing a lot when I was a little kid and found this thing to be extremely entertaining.

The verb 'use' should be in past tense 'used' to match the past time reference 'when I was a little kid'. Also, 'at a find' is incorrect; it should be 'and found' to connect the ideas properly.

× Is somehow is can relieve my mind in the hard situations.

✓ It somehow can relieve my mind in hard situations.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words 'Is somehow is can'. The correct structure is 'It somehow can relieve my mind'. Also, 'the hard situations' should be 'hard situations' for natural expression.

× Well, actually I haven't had anything in courses in my life.

✓ Well, actually I haven't taken any courses in my life.

The phrase 'had anything in courses' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'taken any courses' to indicate participation in courses. Also, 'haven't had' is less appropriate here than 'haven't taken'.

× When I was a little kid, I used to learn how to play the piano but not call with the singing 'cause I feel like I'm not quite confident with my singing abilities.

✓ When I was a little kid, I used to learn how to play the piano but not deal with singing because I feel like I'm not quite confident in my singing abilities.

The phrase 'not call with the singing' is incorrect; it should be 'not deal with singing' or 'not practice singing'. Also, 'confident with' should be 'confident in' when referring to abilities.

× Like I mentioned before, I'm not quite confident with my vocal ability, that's why.

✓ Like I mentioned before, I'm not quite confident in my vocal ability; that's why.

The phrase 'confident with' should be 'confident in' when referring to abilities. Also, a semicolon is better than a comma before 'that's why' to separate independent clauses.

× I always want to sing for all my clothes is 1.

✓ I always want to sing for all my close ones.

The word 'clothes' is incorrect here; it should be 'close ones' meaning close people or family. Also, 'is 1' is unclear and likely a mistake.

× Is that somehow give me the strength to sing in front of them?

✓ That somehow gives me the strength to sing in front of them.

The sentence is incorrectly structured as a question but intended as a statement. Also, 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'That'.

× I feel like singing is one of the best way to express your emotions as well your inner thoughts and also I find thinking to be extremely entertaining and especially to some people have to constantly deal with hard work.

✓ I feel like singing is one of the best ways to express your emotions as well as your inner thoughts, and I also find singing to be extremely entertaining, especially for some people who have to constantly deal with hard work.

'one of the best way' should be 'one of the best ways' (plural). 'as well your inner thoughts' should be 'as well as your inner thoughts'. 'find thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'find singing'. 'especially to some people have to' should be 'especially for some people who have to' for correct preposition and sentence structure.