Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress after a hectic day at work. Although I'm not a very good singer, I enjoy singing for myself as it allows me to relax and express my feelings. Moreover, singing gives me a chance to think and unwind.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'however' appropriately and avoid awkward expressions. Keep your sentences concise and coherent.

Example: No, I have never taken singing classes because I consider myself not very skilled. However, I enjoy singing casually at home with my friends. Maybe in the future, if I become more interested, I might try to learn formally.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and awkward phrases. Focus on making your sentences clear and logical. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Try to express your thoughts in simple, correct English.

Example: I would definitely like to sing for my family because it is easier for me to sing in front of them. They do not judge me and always support me. Singing in front of my family makes me feel comfortable and relaxed, and it gives me pleasure.

Suggestion: Your answer is fragmented and contains unclear phrases. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. Avoid redundancy and focus on expressing your opinion with supporting reasons.

Example: Yes, definitely. Singing is a relaxing activity that helps people feel refreshed. It can bring happiness by allowing people to share their feelings with each other.

× Yes I like singing becauses it relieve my stress from a hectic work.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it relieves my stress from hectic work.

The verb 'relieve' should be in the third person singular present tense 'relieves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'A hectic work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable and does not need an article here.

× Aldo I'm not a very good singer but I enjoy singing for myself as it allows me to relax and express my feelings and singing also gives me a chance to think and unwind.

✓ Also, I'm not a very good singer but I enjoy singing for myself as it allows me to relax and express my feelings, and singing also gives me a chance to think and unwind.

The word 'Aldo' is a misspelling of 'Also'. A comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses properly.

× No, I have never taken.

✓ No, I have never taken singing classes.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object 'singing classes' after 'taken'. The present perfect tense 'have never taken' requires an object to complete the meaning.

× The singing glasses as I am considered a not a very good singer but however I do enjoy singing casually at home with friends even though I know I am not very skilled.

✓ Singing classes, as I am considered not a very good singer, but however I do enjoy singing casually at home with friends even though I know I am not very skilled.

'The singing glasses' is incorrect; it should be 'singing classes'. Also, 'a not a very good singer' is incorrect; it should be 'not a very good singer' without the article 'a' before 'not'.

× Maybe in the future I might try to learn if I get more interested.

✓ Maybe in the future, I might try to learn if I become more interested.

The phrase 'get more interested' is less formal; 'become more interested' is preferred. A comma after 'Maybe in the future' improves readability.

× Will definitely I sing for my family because it is very easier to me that singing in front of them because no one is judging me and there are two more supporting more.

✓ I will definitely sing for my family because it is much easier for me than singing in front of others since no one judges me and they are very supportive.

The modal verb 'will' should be placed after the subject 'I'. 'Very easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is correct. 'To me' should be 'for me'. 'That' should be 'than' for comparison. 'There are two more supporting more' is unclear and corrected to 'they are very supportive'.

× There has been a supporter for me.

✓ They have been supportive of me.

'There has been a supporter for me' is awkward; 'They have been supportive of me' is clearer and uses correct prepositions.

× But there is a computable and relaxing under relaxing to me to sing in front of my family and it is pleasure to me.

✓ But it is comfortable and relaxing for me to sing in front of my family, and it is a pleasure for me.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'computable' should be 'comfortable'; 'under relaxing' is incorrect; 'it is pleasure to me' should be 'it is a pleasure for me'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× Yes, definitely. Singing is more relaxing and. And stressful activity that. Feel that makes feel us fresh and singing can provide happiness to people and also share their feelings with each other.

✓ Yes, definitely. Singing is a relaxing and stress-relieving activity that makes us feel fresh. Singing can provide happiness to people and also help them share their feelings with each other.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunction use and sentence fragments. 'More relaxing and. And stressful activity that.' is incorrect. It is corrected to 'a relaxing and stress-relieving activity'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.