Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear reasons using simple linking words like 'because' or 'and'. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and refresh my mind. It allows me to express my emotions freely. For example, when I feel sad, singing my favorite songs makes me feel better.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Use simple and correct vocabulary to express your ideas.

Example: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not very interested in it. I believe singing is a special skill that not everyone can do well. Therefore, I have not tried to take singing lessons.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and difficult to understand. Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then explain your feelings or reasons with simple sentences and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and keep your answer concise.

Example: I want to sing for my father because he loves music, even though he is not a good singer. Singing for him would show my love and appreciation. It would make both of us happy.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Start with a clear opinion, then support it with reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Use simple and relevant vocabulary to explain your ideas.

Example: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when they feel sad, listening to or singing songs can make them feel better. Music helps people express their feelings and relax.

× How do you like singing? And it should be so fascinating for me and also the reason behind it.

✓ I like singing because it is fascinating to me and there is a reason behind it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into one coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× It's Phil relax and refresh.

✓ It helps me relax and refresh.

'Phil' is incorrect here; the correct pronoun and verb phrase should be 'helps me' to express the intended meaning.

× Also singing just show my imagined emotions outside and also feels good.

✓ Also, singing shows my imagined emotions and makes me feel good.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement issues and awkward phrasing. Correcting the verb form and restructuring the sentence improves clarity.

× And also like I remember my favorite song and whenever I go I feel sad.

✓ Also, I remember my favorite song, and whenever I hear it, I feel sad.

The phrase 'whenever I go' is incorrect; it should be 'whenever I hear it' to convey the intended meaning.

× I just saying it wrong, yeah.

✓ I am just saying it wrong, yeah.

The verb form 'saying' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly.

× No, I didn't.

✓ No, I haven't.

The question is about experience, so present perfect tense 'haven't' is appropriate instead of simple past 'didn't'.

× I never learn to vocalising because I'm not that interested.

✓ I have never learned to vocalise because I'm not that interested.

The verb 'learn' should be in past participle form 'learned' with present perfect tense 'have never learned' to indicate experience up to now.

× I think that singing is good part of you, but singing is not all persons can do.

✓ I think that singing is a good part of you, but not everyone can do it.

The phrase 'not all persons can do' is awkward; 'not everyone can do it' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× The singing is not that easy that you can all people can do it and singing is might be a hard so I'm not interested.

✓ Singing is not that easy; not all people can do it, and it might be hard, so I'm not interested.

The original sentence is confusing and repetitive. Breaking it into clearer parts and correcting verb forms improves understanding.

× I I want to sing for my father because I know he's not well in their vocalising but I love the way they showed their emotions by singing and I also become like a damn.

✓ I want to sing for my father because I know he's not good at vocalising, but I love the way he shows his emotions by singing, and I also become emotional.

Incorrect pronouns 'their' and 'they' are replaced with 'he' to refer correctly to 'my father'. The phrase 'become like a damn' is unclear and replaced with 'become emotional' for clarity.

× So I just want two things for my parents and especially from my father.

✓ So I just want to sing for my parents, especially for my father.

The phrase 'want two things' is incorrect in context; the intended meaning is likely 'want to sing for'.

× In my opinion, I said yes because whenever most of people are said they used to listen to a song and some of them are like to do like appreciated to sing a song so it's on your way and also people like it because they feel reflection and really good.

✓ In my opinion, I say yes because whenever most people are sad, they listen to a song, and some of them like to sing. People like it because they feel reflected and really good.

The original sentence has multiple errors including tense inconsistency, incorrect pronouns, and awkward phrasing. Correcting tense to present, simplifying phrases, and using correct pronouns improves clarity.