Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để ý nghĩa được truyền đạt chính xác. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Example: Yes, I like singing very much because it makes me feel confident when I perform in front of others. Singing also helps me relax and improve my mood whenever I feel stressed.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy trình bày rõ ràng về việc học hát, thời gian và trải nghiệm cụ thể. Sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I have learned how to sing since I was a child. My classmates and I used to memorize many songs together and perform in front of people, which was a memorable experience for us.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

Example: I want to sing for my best friend because we share many interests. We have learned songs together and enjoy listening to each other's performances to give feedback.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để ý nghĩa được truyền đạt rõ ràng. Hãy giải thích cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc hát và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với chủ đề.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and improve their mood. Singing together at events like birthday parties can create a joyful atmosphere.

× I often a performed as in front of other people is make me feel confident.

✓ I often perform in front of other people because it makes me feel confident.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'a performed' which is not a correct verb form here. The verb should be in the base form 'perform' after 'often'. Also, 'is make' is incorrect; it should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Ann Richards my better whenever I feel inside.

✓ Singing makes me feel better whenever I feel down inside.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. 'Ann Richards my better' is nonsensical. The intended meaning seems to be that singing improves the speaker's mood. The corrected sentence clarifies this with proper subject and verb.

× I have learned how to sing songs when I since I was a kid with my classmates and at that time we strive to memorize many songs together and even perform in the people.

✓ I have learned how to sing songs since I was a kid with my classmates, and at that time we strove to memorize many songs together and even performed in front of people.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'Strive' should be in past tense 'strove' to match 'was a kid'. 'Perform' should be 'performed' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'in the people' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'in front of people'.

× and even perform in the people.

✓ and even perform in front of people.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'people'. The correct phrase is 'perform in front of people' to indicate location.

× This is our remember.

✓ This is our memory.

'Remember' is a verb, but here a noun is needed. The correct noun is 'memory'.

× The person that I want to sing for a definitely my friend because she an ash.

✓ The person that I want to sing for is definitely my friend because she is kind.

The sentence has missing verbs and unclear words. 'a definitely' should be 'is definitely'. 'she an ash' is unclear; likely intended 'she is kind' or similar. Pronouns and verbs must be correctly used.

× My friends and I have a lot of thing income are so we have learned how to sing a song and we want to listen to each other to give up fit bags so.

✓ My friends and I have a lot of things in common, so we have learned how to sing songs and we want to listen to each other to give feedback.

'thing income are' is incorrect; it should be 'things in common'. 'a song' should be plural 'songs' to match context. 'give up fit bags so' is unclear; likely 'give feedback'.

× Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

✓ Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Oh definitely yes, because this is a good way to destress and lift our mood.

✓ Oh, definitely yes, because it is a good way to destress and lift our mood.

The sentence is mostly correct but adding a comma after 'Oh' improves clarity. 'this' is better replaced with 'it' to refer to singing.

× If we have a beautiful voice and singing can cheer half an blanking out boards together in a loss of events are party, especially birthday party.

✓ If we have a beautiful voice, singing can cheer people up at various events or parties, especially birthday parties.

The original sentence contains many unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'cheer half an blanking out boards' and 'in a loss of events are party'. These are corrected to meaningful phrases. Also, plural 'birthday parties' is used for generalization.