Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng, ví dụ như nêu rõ bạn có thích hát hay không và lý do tại sao.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and feel more energetic. Singing makes me happy and relaxed, especially when I am stressed.

Suggestion: Bạn cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy giải thích rõ ràng lý do bạn chưa học hát và cách bạn thường hát cho ai nghe.

Example: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I couldn't afford them. However, I often sing at home for my family and friends to enjoy.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ bạn muốn hát cho ai và lý do tại sao.

Example: I want to sing for my parents because I love them very much. I hope my singing can make them happy and feel proud of me.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và có cấu trúc, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy giải thích tại sao hát có thể mang lại hạnh phúc và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and forget their stress. When people sing or listen to music, they often feel more joyful and calm.

× I'm very low saying because I can't.

✓ I'm very bad at singing because I can't.

The phrase 'low saying' is incorrect; the correct form is 'bad at singing' to express inability or lack of skill in singing.

× Bring some energies, good emotion and I think his own.

✓ It brings some energy, good emotion, and I think it's personal.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and uses incorrect pronouns; 'it' should be used to refer to singing, and 'energy' is uncountable, so 'energies' is incorrect.

× Thing when I stretch.

✓ It helps me when I stretch.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding a subject and verb clarifies the meaning.

× No I ever learn how to sing because I don't have much money to learn and my voice not chew enough and I silent true singing so I'm usually seeing my home, my friend and my family to hearing.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't have much money to learn, and my voice is not good enough. I am usually singing at home, with my friends and family to listen.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'ever learn' should be 'have never learned' (present perfect), 'my voice not chew enough' is incorrect and should be 'my voice is not good enough', and 'I silent true singing' is unclear and corrected to 'I am usually singing'. Also, 'seeing' should be 'singing', and 'to hearing' should be 'to listen'.

× I want you sing for my parents because I very love them.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because I love them very much.

'I want you sing' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to sing'. Also, 'I very love them' is incorrect; the adverb 'very' should be placed after the verb as 'love them very much'.

× So I want to create A and also my voice for my parents should hearing and I I want you parents happy and oh wow with my voice.

✓ So I want to create a song, and I want my parents to hear my voice. I want my parents to be happy and amazed by my voice.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Create A' is incomplete; likely 'create a song' is intended. 'My parents should hearing' is incorrect; it should be 'my parents to hear'. 'I want you parents happy' should be 'I want my parents to be happy'.

× Yes, singing can bring hapiness shoot people, because when they stressed they got can listen some music and they're singing.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because when they are stressed, they can listen to some music and sing.

The phrase 'hapiness shoot people' is incorrect; it should be 'happiness to people'. 'They got can listen' is incorrect; it should be 'they can listen'. 'Listen some music' should be 'listen to some music'. 'They're singing' is acceptable but better as 'sing'.

× Oh, and I think it's very good. Sorry that all of them and I know things they can relax and. Not.

✓ Oh, and I think it's very good. Sorry, that's all. I know these things can help them relax.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Sorry that all of them' should be 'Sorry, that's all'. 'I know things they can relax and. Not.' is unclear and corrected to 'I know these things can help them relax.'