Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "thinking a housemaid to relax" and "Which is why" at the end. Try to use clearer and more concise sentences, avoid redundancy, and correct grammar mistakes. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and ensure it flows logically.

Example: Yes, I like singing, but I usually prefer to sing alone because I feel shy when others are around. For example, I often sing in my room where I feel comfortable and free to express myself. Singing helps me relax and improve my mood.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "enjoyed matching the tune an improving my pitch" and "all of my musical year" which is unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about your practice. Keep sentences concise and clear.

Example: I have never had professional singing lessons, but I often imitate songs I hear on the radio to improve my pitch and rhythm. Although I'm not trained, practicing this way is enjoyable and helps me develop my musical skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like "preferred to sync refer to listen". Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and coherent by using linking words.

Example: I'm a quiet and reserved person, so I usually don't sing for others because I feel self-conscious. For example, even in small groups, I get nervous and prefer to listen rather than perform.

Suggestion: Your answer attempts to express an opinion but is unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as "like every," "everything person," and "in the scientifically proven." Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and provide specific supporting details with linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I'm not sure if everyone likes singing, but I believe music is very therapeutic for most people. For example, playing an instrument or listening to music can improve mood and bring happiness.

× I feel quite a shy and self-conscious when people around me.

✓ I feel quite shy and self-conscious when people are around me.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjectives 'shy' and 'self-conscious'. These adjectives describe feelings and do not require an article. Also, the verb 'are' is missing after 'people' to complete the sentence properly.

× For example, I often sing in my room where I feel comfortable and free to express myself thinking a housemaid to relax and improve my mood. Which is why.

✓ For example, I often sing in my room where I feel comfortable and free to express myself, thinking it helps me to relax and improve my mood. That is why.

The phrase 'thinking a housemaid' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. It should be corrected to 'thinking it helps me' to make sense. Also, the sentence fragment 'Which is why.' should be connected properly to the previous sentence for clarity.

× I enjoyed matching the tune an improving my pitch.

✓ I enjoy matching the tune and improving my pitch.

The verb 'enjoyed' is in the past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so the present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate. Also, 'an' should be 'and' to connect the two actions.

× practicing like this helps me to have fun and all of my musical year.

✓ practicing like this helps me to have fun and enjoy all of my musical years.

The phrase 'all of my musical year' is incorrect; it should be plural 'years' to indicate a period of time. Also, adding 'enjoy' clarifies the meaning.

× I tend to get nervous and preferred to sync refer to listen rather than perform.

✓ I tend to get nervous and prefer to sing or listen rather than perform.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but should be present tense 'prefer' to match 'tend to get nervous'. Also, 'sync refer to listen' is unclear and likely a typo; it should be 'sing or listen'.

× I'm not sure like every, I'm not sure whether everything person like singing or not, but I can say for sure that music is very, very therapeutic to everybody and in the scientifically proven.

✓ I'm not sure if everyone likes singing or not, but I can say for sure that music is very, very therapeutic to everybody and it is scientifically proven.

The phrase 'like every' is incorrect; it should be 'if everyone likes'. 'Everything person' should be 'everyone'. Also, 'in the scientifically proven' is incorrect and should be 'it is scientifically proven'.

× So whatever involves music, for example playing a guitar or listening to music can improve people.

✓ So whatever involves music, for example playing the guitar or listening to music, can improve people's well-being.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'people's well-being' clarifies what is improved. Also, 'playing a guitar' is better as 'playing the guitar' when speaking generally.