Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to make your sentences more natural and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Example: No, I don't like singing because my voice is not very clear. So, I feel uncomfortable singing in front of an audience. However, I enjoy listening to music when I have free time.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct tenses and linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in 12th grade. I attended music classes to practice singing songs. However, I was not very successful in improving my singing skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use appropriate vocabulary to express your feelings clearly.

Example: I don't like singing in front of an audience. However, I sometimes sing for my close friends and family. When I do, I feel comfortable and enjoy their company.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your feelings. Avoid unnecessary words and focus on clarity.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, I feel very happy and over the moon when I sing songs with my friends and family.

× No, not at all because I don't like to sing is there is a reason being that I my voice is not clear and that's why I did not want to sing a song in front of audience.

✓ No, not at all because I don't like to sing. The reason is that my voice is not clear, and that's why I do not want to sing a song in front of an audience.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper structure, making it confusing. Breaking it into two sentences and correcting article usage improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, not at all because I don't like to sing is there is a reason being that I my voice is not clear and that's why I did not want to sing a song in front of audience.

✓ No, not at all because I don't like to sing. The reason is that my voice is not clear, and that's why I do not want to sing a song in front of an audience.

The word 'audience' is a singular collective noun and requires the definite article 'an' before it when referring to a group in general.

× But I like to listen to music and when I was free.

✓ But I like to listen to music when I am free.

The phrase 'when I was free' incorrectly uses past tense; since the liking is general and present, 'when I am free' is appropriate.

× Yes, when I was in a class 12 and that time I am I gonna music class, I want to practice how to sing or how to song a song, and that time I do a practice about how to sing a song, but I I was a nurse assess for successful in this.

✓ Yes, when I was in class 12, at that time I was going to music class. I wanted to practice how to sing a song, and I practiced singing, but I was not successful in this.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect verb forms. Using past tense consistently and correcting verb forms clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, when I was in a class 12 and that time I am I gonna music class, I want to practice how to sing or how to song a song, and that time I do a practice about how to sing a song, but I I was a nurse assess for successful in this.

✓ Yes, when I was in class 12, at that time I was going to music class. I wanted to practice how to sing a song, and I practiced singing, but I was not successful in this.

The phrase 'I am I gonna music class' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'going to' a class, not 'gonna'. Also, 'do a practice about' is incorrect; 'practiced singing' is appropriate.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

The question is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I sent you that I am not interested to sing a song and in front of the audience.

✓ I said that I am not interested in singing a song in front of the audience.

The original sentence has incorrect verb choice ('sent' instead of 'said') and incorrect preposition usage ('interested to sing' should be 'interested in singing'). Correcting these improves clarity.

× But apart from this, I sometimes I sing a song in front of my close friends are my family and that time I feel very cooperative with them and I feel very comfortable.

✓ But apart from this, sometimes I sing a song in front of my close friends or my family, and at that time I feel very comfortable with them.

The phrase 'in front of my close friends are my family' is incorrect; 'or' is the correct conjunction. Also, 'feel very cooperative with them' is incorrect; 'feel very comfortable with them' is appropriate.

× But apart from this, I sometimes I sing a song in front of my close friends are my family and that time I feel very cooperative with them and I feel very comfortable.

✓ But apart from this, sometimes I sing a song in front of my close friends or my family, and at that time I feel very comfortable with them.

Using 'are' instead of 'or' is incorrect when listing alternatives. Correct conjunctions improve sentence meaning.

× Just definitely each and every person has their own opinion about the assembly.

✓ Definitely, each and every person has their own opinion about the assembly.

The word 'Just' is unnecessary and incorrect here; removing it clarifies the sentence.

× Not an in my opinion that I feel very happiness when I sing a song with my friends or my family members and that I'm feeling very over the moon at that time.

✓ In my opinion, I feel very happy when I sing a song with my friends or my family members, and I feel over the moon at that time.

The phrase 'Not an in my opinion' is incorrect; 'In my opinion' is correct. Also, 'feel very happiness' should be 'feel very happy' as 'happy' is an adjective describing feelings.