Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid phrases like "small stressing time" and "sing my throat out" which sound unnatural. Instead, use simpler and clearer expressions. Also, try to limit your answer to about 3-4 sentences and directly address the question with a clear topic sentence.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I feel stressed. Singing lifts my mood and makes me feel better during difficult times.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain your reason clearly. Avoid incomplete sentences and confusing phrases like "I always start" and "Singing for myself is always my prayer." Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I don't think my voice is good enough to sing in front of others. However, I enjoy singing alone as it makes me feel peaceful.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to combine your ideas into fewer sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'however' correctly. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Be clear and concise in your explanation.

Example: I usually sing for myself because I don't feel confident singing in front of others. However, I enjoy it and feel happy when I sing alone.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains incorrect phrases like "bacon freebies relaxed" which do not make sense. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and your ideas are clearly expressed. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them feel relaxed and forget their worries.

× Yes, I do like singing because whenever I am in the small stressing time of my life, I sing my throat out so that I can be relaxed.

✓ Yes, I do like singing because whenever I am in a small stressful time in my life, I sing my throat out so that I can relax.

The phrase 'small stressing time' is incorrect; 'stressful' is the correct adjective to describe a time that causes stress. Also, 'can be relaxed' should be 'can relax' to correctly use the verb form indicating the subject's action.

× No, I didn't because I always start.

✓ No, I didn't because I never started.

The sentence is about a past event, so 'start' should be in the past tense 'started'. Also, 'always' contradicts the negative 'didn't'; 'never' fits better to express that the action did not happen.

× My voice alone isn't a good voice so that I can sing in front of people.

✓ My voice alone isn't good enough for me to sing in front of people.

The phrase 'so that I can' is incorrectly used here. The sentence intends to express inability, so 'good enough for me to' is more appropriate. Also, 'a good voice' is redundant; 'good enough' suffices.

× But. Singing for myself is always my prayer.

✓ But singing for myself is always my prayer.

The period after 'But' incorrectly breaks the sentence. 'But' should be connected to the following clause without a period.

× Because I felt it more confident forcing myself.

✓ Because I feel more confident forcing myself.

The question is in present tense, so the answer should also be in present tense. 'Felt' should be 'feel' to maintain tense consistency.

× I never felt confident of my voice so that I can sing in front of other people.

✓ I never felt confident about my voice so that I could sing in front of other people.

The correct preposition with 'confident' is 'about', not 'of'. Also, 'can' should be 'could' to match the past tense 'felt'.

× However, I find myself charming when I'm singing my singing to myself.

✓ However, I find myself charming when I sing to myself.

The phrase 'singing my singing' is redundant and incorrect. Simplifying to 'sing to myself' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I do think so, because they can. Feeling happiness and bacon freebies relaxed and they can let the negative part of their head by singing.

✓ Yes, I do think so, because they can feel happiness and become relaxed, and they can let go of the negative thoughts in their mind by singing.

The original sentence has fragmented and incorrect phrases like 'Feeling happiness and bacon freebies relaxed'. It should be a complete sentence with proper verbs and objects. 'Bacon freebies' is nonsensical and replaced with 'become'. Also, 'let the negative part of their head' is corrected to 'let go of the negative thoughts in their mind' for clarity and correctness.