Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is quite natural and effective, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors and keep your tenses consistent. Also, you can use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas more smoothly. Try to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences for better clarity.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and personality. Moreover, singing relaxes me and clears my mind after a busy day. For instance, when I sing my favourite songs, I feel more peaceful and motivated.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly and clearly to the question. Avoid redundancy and irrelevant information. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast ideas. Also, keep your sentences concise and coherent.

Example: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons. I believe singing is a natural ability; some people are good at it while others are not. For me, singing is just a hobby that I enjoy without any professional training.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Make sure to use correct pronouns and sentence structures. Also, try to be more specific and coherent by using linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Keep your answer focused and avoid repetition.

Example: I would like to sing for my mother because she is one of the most important people in my life. She has supported me through all phases, and singing for her would be a great way to show my love and gratitude.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use relevant vocabulary and avoid unrelated or incorrect information. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly. Keep your sentences simple and logical.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their feelings and relax. For example, studies show that people who listen to their favourite songs daily tend to feel happier than others.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The verb 'learn' in American English uses the past participle 'learned' rather than 'learnt'. Using 'learned' is more common and correct in this context.

× No, I don't think you have to learn singing.

✓ No, I don't think you have to learn to sing.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here; the speaker should refer to themselves using 'I'. Also, 'learn singing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'learn to sing' because 'learn' is followed by the infinitive verb.

× but according to me it is just natural thing.

✓ but according to me it is just a natural thing.

The noun 'thing' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× Some people are really good at it while some are not.

✓ Some people are really good at it, while others are not.

The sentence lacks parallel structure; 'some' should be followed by a noun or pronoun. Using 'others' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× So I think I have.

✓ So I think I do.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I have' needs an object or complement. 'I do' correctly responds to the implied question about ability or experience.

× I have never actually gone to any classes or some institute for singing.

✓ I have never actually gone to any classes or any institute for singing.

The phrase 'some institute' is incorrect here; 'any institute' fits better in negative sentences to indicate no specific institute.

× It's just a side hobby for me and it's just like it like that.

✓ It's just a side hobby for me, and it's just like that.

The phrase 'it's just like it like that' is redundant and awkward. Removing the extra 'it' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× The one person I would like to sing with my mother.

✓ The one person I would like to sing with is my mother.

The sentence lacks a verb; adding 'is' completes the sentence structure.

× This is because he's one of the most important person in my life that actually helped me in more money through through all the phases of my life.

✓ This is because she is one of the most important people in my life who has actually helped me through all the phases of my life.

The pronoun 'he's' is incorrect when referring to 'my mother'; it should be 'she is'. 'Person' should be plural 'people' to match 'one of the'. The phrase 'helped me in more money' is incorrect and removed for clarity. Also, 'through through' is a repetition error.

× So I think that it would be a great opportunity for me as well to represent how much I love her.

✓ So I think that it would be a great opportunity for me as well to show how much I love her.

The verb 'represent' is not appropriate here; 'show' better conveys the intended meaning.

× Well yes, I think that thinking can actually make people into the asking and also over excited.

✓ Well yes, I think that singing can actually make people excited and also overexcited.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'singing' to match the context. 'Make people into the asking' is incorrect and replaced with 'make people excited'. 'Over excited' should be one word 'overexcited'.

× This is mainly because it has some verbs and also sentences that make people wonder what will be going to next which actually brings curiosity and also a sense of happiness.

✓ This is mainly because it has some verses and sentences that make people wonder what will happen next, which actually brings curiosity and a sense of happiness.

The word 'verbs' is incorrect; it should be 'verses' referring to parts of songs. 'What will be going to next' is ungrammatical; 'what will happen next' is correct.

× Also for example a scientific study version, there are people who listen to their favorite songs daily are more prone to be happy than others.

✓ Also, for example, a scientific study shows that people who listen to their favorite songs daily are more prone to be happy than others.

The phrase 'scientific study version' is incorrect; 'scientific study shows' is correct. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'shows that' and commas for clarity.