Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать правильные времена и более связные предложения, чтобы ответ был естественным и понятным. Также избегайте излишней повторяемости и старайтесь выражать мысли ясно.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I am not very confident in my singing skills, so I mostly enjoy listening to others who are talented.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много грамматических и лексических ошибок, а также неясные выражения. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, чтобы ответ был понятен и логичен. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

Example: To be honest, I have never taken formal singing lessons. Sometimes, I watch YouTube videos to learn some singing techniques, but I haven't studied singing seriously.

Suggestion: Ответ нечеткий и содержит ошибки. Рекомендуется строить предложения более логично и использовать связующие слова. Также стоит конкретизировать мысли и избегать неопределенных выражений.

Example: I would like to sing for everyone, but currently, I feel too embarrassed to sing in front of others except my family. They are the only people who accept my singing.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много ошибок и нечетких выражений. Рекомендуется использовать простые и правильные предложения, а также конкретные детали, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и связным.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. It is a part of many cultures and helps people feel encouraged and live a fulfilling life.

× I enjoy singing but I don't think that I quite good in it.

✓ I enjoy singing but I don't think that I am quite good at it.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to complete the present tense structure 'I am quite good'. Also, the preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'at' when talking about skills.

× I enjoy stuff that related to music, but singing is just my weak point because I'm.

✓ I enjoy stuff that is related to music, but singing is just my weak point because I am.

The phrase 'stuff that related to music' is missing the verb 'is' to form the correct relative clause 'stuff that is related to music'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'because I'm' which should be completed as 'because I am'.

× Always captivated with people who are good at singing, but I'm not. Unfortunately.

✓ I am always captivated by people who are good at singing, but I'm not, unfortunately.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'I am' completes the sentence. Also, the preposition 'with' should be 'by' to indicate being captivated by someone.

× I've never learned how to saying if it's related to class to offline getting subject of singing.

✓ I've never learned how to sing if it's related to offline classes about singing.

The verb 'saying' is incorrect here; the correct form is the base verb 'sing' after 'how to'. The phrase 'offline getting subject of singing' is unclear and corrected to 'offline classes about singing' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes I just get a glance at YouTube. Which candles can be just teaching singing?

✓ Sometimes I just glance at YouTube videos that can teach singing.

The phrase 'get a glance at' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'glance at'. The second sentence is a fragment and unclear; it is corrected to a complete sentence explaining the purpose of the YouTube videos.

× I would like to sing for everyone if my voice. Where? I don't know, maybe beautiful?

✓ I would like to sing for everyone if my voice were good. Where? I don't know, maybe somewhere beautiful.

The phrase 'if my voice' is incomplete and needs a verb and adjective to make sense, corrected to 'if my voice were good'. The question 'Where?' is incomplete and is clarified to 'maybe somewhere beautiful'.

× For now, I'm just too embarrassed to sing for anyone else except my family.

✓ For now, I'm just too embarrassed to sing for anyone except my family.

The phrase 'anyone else except my family' is redundant; 'anyone except my family' is sufficient and grammatically correct.

× I guess that they are the only people who can just handle me in my singing.

✓ I guess that they are the only people who can tolerate my singing.

The phrase 'handle me in my singing' is awkward and unclear. 'Tolerate my singing' is a more natural and correct expression.

× So obviously, yes, I think that saying not only can bring, it also brings hapiness and willing to leave a full life and saying actually it's part of a lot of cultures that I know that makes feel people encouraged.

✓ So obviously, yes, I think that singing not only can bring happiness, but it also brings a willingness to live a full life. Singing is actually part of many cultures that I know, and it makes people feel encouraged.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear phrases like 'saying not only can bring' and 'willing to leave a full life'. It is corrected to clear, grammatically correct sentences with proper subject-verb agreement and vocabulary.