Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to speak more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and focus on expressing your ideas in a natural and coherent way. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my feelings and emotions. When I sing, I just follow my heart and enjoy the moment. I find it very relaxing and a good way to relieve stress.

Suggestion: Focus on clear pronunciation and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, provide more specific details about your learning experience.

Example: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. In my home country, Indonesia, we start learning the basics of singing in elementary school. For example, we practice the correct pronunciation of the do-re-mi notes to improve our singing skills.

Suggestion: Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, improve grammar and vocabulary for clarity.

Example: I usually sing for myself or for people I know, like my friends and family. Although I don't have a very good voice, singing helps me refresh my feelings and enjoy the moment.

Suggestion: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear opinion, then explain your reasons using linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary and avoid unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, I definitely agree that singing can bring happiness to people. It allows us to express our feelings, whether we are sad or happy. Singing helps people relax and feel better, which is why it is so enjoyable.

× Yes, I do like seeing.

✓ Yes, I do like singing.

The student mistakenly used 'seeing' instead of 'singing'. 'Singing' is the correct gerund form of the verb 'sing' to express the activity they like. 'Seeing' relates to vision and is incorrect in this context.

× I think singing like can express your feeling as fresh, your emotion like and then you just enjoy the wife and then you do need to think too much like what kind of something you need to saying just like follow your heart an emotion at that time.

✓ I think singing can express your feelings freshly, your emotions, and then you just enjoy the life and you don't need to think too much about what you need to say, just follow your heart and emotions at that time.

The original sentence misuses 'like' and 'saying' instead of 'say'. 'Singing' is correct as a gerund here. 'Saying' should be 'say' because after 'need to' the base verb is used. Also, 'wife' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'life'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× So I think seeing is kind of good healing journey to be followed.

✓ So I think singing is kind of a good healing journey to be followed.

Again, 'seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing' as the activity discussed. Also, 'a' is needed before 'good healing journey' for correct article usage.

× Yes, I have so.

✓ Yes, I have.

The phrase 'I have so' is incorrect. The correct response to 'Have you ever learnt how to sing?' is 'Yes, I have.' The word 'so' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here.

× Back to my home country in Indonesia, we need to learn how to do the basics of singing that we learn from the elementary school.

✓ Back in my home country, Indonesia, we needed to learn the basics of singing from elementary school.

The phrase 'Back to my home country' is incorrect; 'Back in my home country' is appropriate. Also, 'we need to learn' should be past tense 'we needed to learn' to match the past context. 'From the elementary school' should be 'from elementary school' without 'the'.

× The we need to know how to correctly say the doremi partial aceto.

✓ Then we needed to know how to correctly say the do-re-mi partial scale.

'The' at the start is likely a typo for 'Then'. 'Doremi partial aceto' is unclear; likely intended 'do-re-mi partial scale'. Also, 'need to' should be past tense 'needed to' to match the past context.

× I would say that for myself or for the one I knew like my friends or my family, because.

✓ I would say that for myself or for the ones I know, like my friends or my family, because...

'The one I knew' is incorrect; it should be 'the ones I know' to refer to multiple people currently known. Also, the sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar.

× I could say I'm not very good in singing.

✓ I could say I'm not very good at singing.

The correct preposition after 'good' when referring to an activity is 'at', not 'in'.

× I mean, I I don't have a good voice is so I realize up there.

✓ I mean, I don't have a good voice, so I realise that.

The phrase 'is so I realize up there' is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected to 'so I realise that' for clarity and grammar. Also, 'I I' is a repetition error.

× So for me singing therefore farm for a fresh my feeling, that's all.

✓ So for me, singing is therefore a way to refresh my feelings, that's all.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'farm' is likely 'form' or 'way'; 'for a fresh my feeling' is incorrect. Corrected to 'a way to refresh my feelings' for clarity and grammar.

× I think singing of course can bring happiness to people because thing is like the way how you express your feeling your impression of something like if you feeling sad, happy or whatever.

✓ I think singing, of course, can bring happiness to people because it is like the way you express your feelings and your impressions of something, like if you are feeling sad, happy, or whatever.

The sentence had missing pronouns and incorrect verb forms: 'thing is like' should be 'it is like'; 'your feeling your impression' should be 'your feelings and your impressions'; 'if you feeling' should be 'if you are feeling'.

× Like seeing like you can just seeing relax in yeah nothing to loose.

✓ Like singing, you can just relax and have nothing to lose.

'Seeing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. 'You can just seeing relax in' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'you can just relax'. 'Loose' is a misspelling of 'lose'.