Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using simple linking words like 'because' or 'and'. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors.

Example: Yes, I like singing because my father also loves it, and I started learning it at school. Since then, I have improved a lot and enjoy singing very much.

Suggestion: Your answer should be more structured and grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'and' or 'which' to connect ideas. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'now dies'.

Example: Yes, I learned singing during my school days, and it has helped me gain confidence. I am passionate about singing and have won several awards.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and clear. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons, and avoid confusing phrases like 'see for my birth mother'.

Example: If I get a chance to sing for someone, I would choose my birth mother because she has sacrificed a lot for me, and I want to express my love and gratitude through my singing.

Suggestion: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas. Avoid unclear phrases like 'seen Richard Dean'.

Example: I think singing can bring happiness because many people have stressful lives, going from work to home. For example, listening to music helps them relax and feel happier.

× Yes, I have been interesting singing because I get same genetics as from my father because he also loved to sing as well as I started learning singing from my school time and now and now I'm very good singer.

✓ Yes, I have been interested in singing because I have the same genetics as my father, who also loved to sing. I started learning singing from my school days and now I am a very good singer.

The adjective 'interesting' is incorrectly used instead of the past participle adjective 'interested' to describe the speaker's feeling. Also, 'get same genetics as from my father' is corrected to 'have the same genetics as my father' for clarity and correctness. Repetition of 'and now' is removed. 'From my school time' is corrected to 'from my school days' to use the correct expression.

× Definitely from my school days I learned singing as well as it helps me to give me so much confidence and now dies.

✓ Definitely, from my school days I learned singing, and it has helped me gain a lot of confidence until now.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Learned' is past tense, so the following clause should reflect the ongoing effect using present perfect 'has helped'. 'Helps me to give me' is redundant and corrected to 'has helped me gain'. 'Now dies' is unclear and removed.

× I always be passionate about singing and easily won so many awards.

✓ I have always been passionate about singing and have easily won many awards.

The verb 'be' is incorrectly used in present simple 'I always be'. It should be present perfect 'have always been' to indicate a continuous state. 'Easily won' is past tense but needs present perfect 'have won' to show experience up to now. 'So many' is corrected to 'many' for natural usage.

× Well nowadays if ever I get chance to sing for someone then I will definitely see for my birth mother because as she sacrifices all of her desires for me and also I want to express my love and emotions feelings toward his love.

✓ Well, nowadays if I ever get a chance to sing for someone, I will definitely sing for my birth mother because she sacrificed all of her desires for me. I also want to express my love and emotional feelings towards her love.

'See for my birth mother' is incorrect; it should be 'sing for my birth mother'. 'As she sacrifices' is changed to past tense 'she sacrificed' to match the context. 'Emotions feelings' is redundant; corrected to 'emotional feelings'. 'Toward his love' is incorrect pronoun usage; corrected to 'towards her love'.

× I think so because in today's hectic schedule most of the individuals not happy because as they follow seen Richard Dean in their daily lives from work to home, home to work.

✓ I think so because in today's hectic schedule, most individuals are not happy as they follow a routine in their daily lives from work to home and home to work.

'Not happy' needs auxiliary verb 'are' to form correct present tense. 'Because as they follow seen Richard Dean' is unclear and corrected to 'as they follow a routine'. Prepositions and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× So with the help of singing they can easily relax themselves and they can get some hapiness. For instance, most of the individuals nowadays prefer to listen music to relax them so.

✓ So, with the help of singing, they can easily relax themselves and gain some happiness. For instance, most individuals nowadays prefer to listen to music to relax.

'Get some hapiness' is corrected to 'gain some happiness'. 'Listen music' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to music'. The sentence ending with 'so' is incomplete and removed for clarity.