Part 1
Examiner
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidate
Aye. Yes, of course. I like saying, I like say, with my friends in call OK Systems because I think it is a fun way to connect with people who share similar interests.
Examiner
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidate
Uh, no, I've never has anything, uh. Formal saying stations. I prefer listening to music rather than saying and I'm not confident my saying ability.
Examiner
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidate
I would love to sing for my family because they have always my big being. My biggest supporters are saying for family gathering is a traditional and I feel comfortable and relax in front of performing in front of them.
Examiner
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidate
Yes, of course, I believe Singham brings happiness to people because I think it releases endorphins which can make people feel happier. And is it good? Great way to express emotions and relieve express thing together can create a sense of community and belonging.
Do you like singing? Why?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 你的回答中存在发音错误和语法错误,例如将'singing'误说为'saying',影响了表达的清晰度。建议加强发音练习,注意动词形式的正确使用,并且回答时尽量简洁明了。
Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it is a fun way to connect with friends who share similar interests.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多,如've never has'应为'have never had','formal saying stations'应为'formal singing lessons'。建议加强语法基础,尤其是时态和名词搭配,同时注意发音。
Example: No, I have never had any formal singing lessons. I prefer listening to music because I am not confident in my singing ability.
Who do you want to sing for?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答中句子结构混乱,表达不清晰。建议练习句子结构,使用连词使表达更连贯,同时注意词汇的正确使用。
Example: I would love to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters. Singing at family gatherings is a tradition, and I feel comfortable and relaxed performing in front of them.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答中有发音和语法错误,如'Singham'应为'singing',句子不够连贯。建议多练习表达情感和原因时的句型,使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Example: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it releases endorphins that make people feel happier. Moreover, it is a great way to express emotions and can create a sense of community and belonging.
× I like saying, I like say, with my friends in call OK Systems because I think it is a fun way to connect with people who share similar interests.
✓ I like singing with my friends in call OK Systems because I think it is a fun way to connect with people who share similar interests.
动词后面接动名词形式(-ing)表示喜欢做某事,原句中'saying'应为'singing',且'say'用法错误,应使用动名词形式。
× Uh, no, I've never has anything, uh. Formal saying stations.
✓ Uh, no, I've never had any formal singing lessons.
现在完成时中,助动词have后应接过去分词'had',原句中'has'用法错误,且'saying stations'应为'singing lessons'。
× I prefer listening to music rather than saying and I'm not confident my saying ability.
✓ I prefer listening to music rather than singing and I'm not confident in my singing ability.
动词后接动名词表示偏好,'saying'应为'singing',且'confident'后应加介词'in'。
× I would love to sing for my family because they have always my big being.
✓ I would love to sing for my family because they have always been my biggest supporters.
原句中'big being'错误,应为'biggest supporters',表示最大的支持者。
× My biggest supporters are saying for family gathering is a traditional and I feel comfortable and relax in front of performing in front of them.
✓ My biggest supporters are my family. Singing for family gatherings is a tradition and I feel comfortable and relaxed performing in front of them.
原句结构混乱,'saying'应为'singing','relax'应为过去分词'relaxed',且句子需拆分以表达清晰。
× And is it good? Great way to express emotions and relieve express thing together can create a sense of community and belonging.
✓ And it is a great way to express emotions and relieve stress. Expressing things together can create a sense of community and belonging.
原句中'And is it good?'结构错误,应为'And it is good','relieve express thing'表达不当,应为'relieve stress',且句子需拆分以表达清晰。