Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, clarify phrases like "sing with my friends in the TV" to make your meaning clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is a relaxing activity during my free time, especially after a whole week of work. Moreover, I like to sing with my friends while watching TV, which makes me feel more energetic and happy.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use the correct past participle "learned" and avoid vague phrases like "that thing." Also, try to combine sentences using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally. However, singing is one of my hobbies because it helps me relax and reduce stress. Additionally, it gives me more energy and improves my mood, especially after a long day.

Suggestion: Your answer has several unclear or incorrect words (e.g., "called me," "Kariste," "seeing for her," "make me hyper"). Focus on using clear and correct vocabulary. Also, organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your reasons.

Example: I want to sing for my mom because she always supports me and shows me a lot of love. She is a very caring person, and singing for her would be a way to express my gratitude. Moreover, it would make me very happy to see her smile when I sing a song for her.

Suggestion: Your answer contains many unclear phrases and grammatical errors, which affect understanding. Try to speak more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

Example: Definitely, yes. I think singing is a common activity all around the world, and people use it to express different kinds of emotions. For example, when they feel happy or even stressed, singing can help them release their feelings and improve their mood.

× Oh yes, I really enjoy singing becauses it's a really relaxing activity during my free time, especially after we whole week work.

✓ Oh yes, I really enjoy singing because it's a really relaxing activity during my free time, especially after we work the whole week.

The word 'becauses' is a misspelling of the conjunction 'because'. Also, the phrase 'after we whole week work' is incorrect; the correct order is 'after we work the whole week'. This corrects the conjunction and word order errors.

× I like to sing with my friends in in the TV and it makes me feel more energetic and happy.

✓ I like to sing with my friends on the TV and it makes me feel more energetic and happy.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used twice and should be 'on' when referring to TV as a medium. Also, the repetition of 'in' is a typographical error.

× No, I have never learn how to sing professionally.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing professionally.

The verb 'learn' should be in the past participle form 'learned' to correctly follow the present perfect tense 'have never'. This is a past tense issue.

× However, singing is one of my hobby 'cause it helps.

✓ However, singing is one of my hobbies 'cause it helps.

The noun 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it is preceded by 'one of my', which requires a plural noun.

× She is very Kariste caring person and seeing for her would be a way to express my gratitude.

✓ She is a very caring person and singing for her would be a way to express my gratitude.

The word 'Kariste' appears to be a typo and should be removed. Also, 'seeing' is incorrect and should be 'singing' to match the context. Additionally, the article 'a' is missing before 'very caring person'.

× It would be make me hyper to see her smile when I sing a song for her.

✓ It would make me happy to see her smile when I sing a song for her.

The phrase 'would be make' is incorrect; it should be 'would make'. Also, 'hyper' is informal and inappropriate here; 'happy' fits better in this context.

× I think thinking is a common activity all around the world.

✓ I think singing is a common activity all around the world.

The word 'thinking' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'singing' to answer the question properly. This is a sentence structure and word choice error.

× And are we running can singing to express? Different kinds of emotions.

✓ And we can use singing to express different kinds of emotions.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. The corrected sentence properly structures the idea that singing is used to express emotions.

× For example, when they feel happy side or even stressed, they can seem to release their feelings and improve their mood.

✓ For example, when they feel happy or even stressed, they can release their feelings and improve their mood.

The phrase 'happy side' is incorrect; 'happy' alone is sufficient. Also, 'seem to release' is awkward; 'can release' is clearer and more appropriate.