Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and natural flow. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons, and avoid redundancy. Use simpler and more precise language to express your feelings about singing.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it has been a part of my culture since childhood. Singing helps me relax and refresh my mind after a long day at work. It feels like a way to express my emotions and connect with my soul.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more coherent and concise. Start with a clear statement, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating similar ideas and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Example: I have never formally learned to sing, but I have always enjoyed watching movies and listening to music since childhood. Through this, I have tried to teach myself how to sing and I really love singing songs.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Begin with a clear topic sentence and then provide specific examples to support your answer.

Example: I want to sing for anyone I care about, such as my family, my girlfriend, and my friends. Singing makes me feel comfortable, so it doesn't really matter who I sing for.

Suggestion: Your answer conveys the main idea but lacks coherence and contains grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clearer explanations. Also, correct sentence structure will make your answer more natural.

Example: Yes, absolutely. Singing can bring happiness to people because it transcends language barriers. People from different cultures and backgrounds can enjoy singing, even if they do not understand the lyrics.

× And the place from where I belong, that is whispering all singing is like taught from the childhood.

✓ And in the place where I belong, singing is like a tradition taught since childhood.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unclear phrasing. 'Whispering all singing' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The phrase 'like taught from the childhood' is ungrammatical; 'taught since childhood' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× This is my favorite pastime singing like Purify is my soul and the notes I hit.

✓ This is my favorite pastime; singing purifies my soul, and the notes I hit

The phrase 'singing like Purify is my soul' is incorrect. 'Purify' should be 'purifies' (verb form) and the sentence needs punctuation to separate ideas. The corrected sentence uses a semicolon and proper verb form to convey the meaning clearly.

× They are like a refresher for me after a long hard day from office.

✓ They are like a refresher for me after a long, hard day at the office.

The phrase 'from office' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at the office'. Also, a comma is needed between 'long' and 'hard' as coordinate adjectives.

× I have not learned, I can say, but I have always watched movies, heard albums from my childhood and try to learn from my own, like how to sing and I love to sing the songs.

✓ I have not learned formally, I can say, but I have always watched movies, listened to albums since my childhood and tried to learn on my own, like how to sing, and I love to sing songs.

The verb 'try' should be in past tense 'tried' to maintain tense consistency with 'have always watched' and 'have not learned'. Also, 'heard albums' is better expressed as 'listened to albums'. 'From my own' is incorrect; 'on my own' is correct.

× I want to sing for like anyone whom I like, for my family, for my girlfriend, for my friends.

✓ I want to sing for anyone I like, for my family, for my girlfriend, and for my friends.

The phrase 'for like anyone whom I like' is awkward and redundant. 'Anyone I like' is sufficient. Also, adding 'and' before the last item in the list improves clarity.

× Singing is all that makes me comfortable.

✓ Singing is what makes me comfortable.

The phrase 'all that makes me comfortable' is awkward. 'What makes me comfortable' is the correct relative pronoun usage here.

× Doesn't matter who I sing for.

✓ It doesn't matter who I sing for.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It'. 'Doesn't matter who I sing for' is a fragment; adding 'It' makes it a complete sentence.

× Big 'cause singing.

✓ Because singing

'Big 'cause singing' is an incomplete and unclear phrase. It should be 'Because singing' to start the explanation properly.

× Has no restrictions of language.

✓ It has no restrictions of language.

The sentence is missing the subject 'It'. Adding 'It' makes the sentence complete.

× Even people from different cultures different three different cost can enjoy singing and doesn't matter if they understand the lyrics or not.

✓ Even people from different cultures and different countries can enjoy singing, and it doesn't matter if they understand the lyrics or not.

The phrase 'different three different cost' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Different countries' is appropriate. Also, 'doesn't matter' needs the subject 'it'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.