Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid unclear phrases and focus on natural English. For example, say "Yes, I like singing because it is popular in my country and it helps me improve my skills."

Example: Yes, I like singing because many people in my country enjoy it, and it helps me improve my confidence and mood.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Use simple sentences to explain your learning experience. For example, "Yes, I learned singing at school as a subject, and my father also taught me how to sing."

Example: Yes, I learned singing at school where we studied notes, and my father helped me practice at home.

Suggestion: Give a clear answer about who you want to sing for and why. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I want to sing for my father because he has a great voice and is respected in my country. I hope to be like him."

Example: I want to sing for my father because he is a talented singer and many people respect him. I want to follow his example.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion, then explain with reasons. Use linking words like 'although' and 'because' correctly. For example, "Although not everyone likes singing, I think it brings happiness because it creates good feelings."

Example: Although some people don't enjoy singing, I believe it brings happiness because it helps people feel relaxed and joyful.

× You have a subject and on the singing owing to.

✓ You have a subject on singing.

The phrase 'and on the singing owing to' is incorrect and confusing. The correct preposition is 'on' to indicate the subject matter. Remove unnecessary words to clarify the sentence.

× In my country, all of people are singing.

✓ In my country, all the people are singing.

The phrase 'all of people' is incorrect; it should be 'all the people' to correctly refer to the entire group.

× Also it's helped me to improve myself in the singing for the move, it helped.

✓ Also, it has helped me to improve myself in singing; it helped a lot.

The pronoun 'it's' should be 'it has' for clarity, and 'in the singing for the move' is unclear; 'in singing' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Uh, actually when I was in school, I have as a subject in the singing and the lead me how to sing for them or their learning how we can use the note and I think also.

✓ Uh, actually when I was in school, I had singing as a subject, and they taught me how to sing and how to use the notes, I think.

The present perfect 'have' is incorrect for past time reference; use past tense 'had'. 'The lead me' should be 'they taught me'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense.

× I learned with my father to how we say.

✓ I learned from my father how to sing.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'from' is used to indicate the source of learning. 'How we say' is unclear; 'how to sing' is appropriate.

× Are you prepared to sync with my father?

✓ I want to sing with my father.

The original sentence is a question and unclear. The intended meaning is likely a statement about wanting to sing with the father. 'Sync' is incorrect; 'sing' is correct.

× Owing to its big girl a signal and my country on all the people of respect him.

✓ He is a big singer, and in my country, all the people respect him.

'Big girl a signal' is incorrect; it should be 'big singer'. 'All the people of respect him' is incorrect; correct form is 'all the people respect him'.

× Uh, he have a good voice to sing.

✓ Uh, he has a good voice to sing.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'.

× Furthermore, I should be like them in.

✓ Furthermore, I want to be like him.

The pronoun 'them' is plural but refers to a singular person; 'him' is correct. The sentence is completed for clarity.

× Although some people don't love the singing and other people love to listen the singing.

✓ Although some people don't love singing, other people love to listen to singing.

The article 'the' before 'singing' is unnecessary. The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object.

× Owing to its help him to be a happiness furthermore it's helped him to like have I I good feeling.

✓ Because it helps him to be happy; furthermore, it helps him to have a good feeling.

The pronouns 'its' and 'him' are misused. 'Its' should be 'it', and the sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.