Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repeating the question in your answer and focus on giving a clear, concise response. Also, be careful with pronunciation and word choice to ensure clarity. For example, instead of 'I usually member Mesmer eyes several compositions,' you could say 'I usually memorise several songs and compositions during my free time.' Keep your answer within 4-5 sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is my passion. I usually memorise several songs during my free time, which helps me relax and feel satisfied. When I was a child, I used to sing a lot, which helped me develop my skills.

Suggestion: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding specific details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. Also, try to use more natural phrasing, for example, 'When I was in fourth grade, my school offered singing classes, so I attended regularly to improve my skills.'

Example: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. When I was in fourth grade, my school offered singing classes, so I attended them regularly to improve my skills. These classes helped me a lot in developing my singing ability.

Suggestion: Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea. For example, you could say, 'I want to sing for my mother because she is my idol and has taught me valuable life lessons.'

Example: I want to sing a song for my mother because she is my idol. She has taught me many important things about life and how to behave well in society. Singing for her is my dream and a way to show my appreciation.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and connected by using linking words such as 'because' and 'so'. Also, try to avoid incomplete sentences and be more specific. For example, you could say, 'Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and forget their daily problems.'

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and change their mood. Many people use music to distract themselves from stress and daily problems, which makes them feel better.

× I I usually member Mesmer eyes several compositions and songs during my free time and it provides me a feeling of more relaxation and satisfaction and I used to sing a lot of songs when I was a child.

✓ I usually memorise several compositions and songs during my free time, and it provides me with a feeling of more relaxation and satisfaction. I used to sing a lot of songs when I was a child.

The original sentence has repetition ('I I'), incorrect word choice ('member Mesmer eyes' instead of 'memorise'), run-on sentence structure, and missing prepositions. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× there were a classes of singing which were provided by the school authority and there I regularly went for the classes which will help to maintain a lot in improving my singing skills.

✓ There were singing classes provided by the school authority, and I regularly attended these classes which helped me a lot in improving my singing skills.

The phrase 'there were a classes' is incorrect; 'classes' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, 'went for the classes' is better expressed as 'attended these classes'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× which will help to maintain a lot in improving my singing skills.

✓ which helped me a lot in improving my singing skills.

The original uses future tense 'will help' in a past context. Since the classes were in the past, the verb should be in past tense 'helped' to maintain tense consistency.

× she taught me a lot of things about life and gives me lessons about how to interact with the people and have a good character among the society and I will definitely sing a song on my mother as it is my dream.

✓ She taught me a lot of things about life and gave me lessons about how to interact with people and have good character in society. I will definitely sing a song for my mother as it is my dream.

The original sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly ('taught' and 'gives'). Also, 'on my mother' should be 'for my mother'. 'The people' and 'the society' are better as 'people' and 'society' without articles here.

× Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people as it is a key feature of. Relaxing the people and changing the mind of people.

✓ Yes, of course, singing can bring happiness to people as it is a key way of relaxing people and changing their minds.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkwardly structured. 'A key feature of' is incomplete and should be 'a key way of'. Also, 'relaxing the people' and 'changing the mind of people' are better expressed as 'relaxing people' and 'changing their minds'.

× People often use music as a key to distract from their stressful life and. The problems which they are facing in their daily life.

✓ People often use music as a key to distract themselves from their stressful lives and the problems they face in their daily life.

The original sentence is fragmented and has awkward phrasing. 'Distract from their stressful life and.' is incomplete. Adding 'themselves' after 'distract' and combining the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.