Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, for example, say "I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing abilities. I prefer listening to music rather than singing myself." Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unnecessary pauses.

Example: I don't like singing because I'm not confident in my singing abilities. Instead, I enjoy listening to music, which relaxes me.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite unclear and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, "No, I have never learned how to sing because I enjoy listening to music more. Also, I lack confidence in my singing abilities and feel shy singing in front of others."

Example: No, I have never learned how to sing because I prefer listening to music. Moreover, I feel shy and not confident enough to sing in front of people.

Suggestion: Your answer does not directly address the question. The examiner asked who you want to sing for, but you talked about others singing. Try to answer directly with a topic sentence and then add details. For example, "I would like to sing for my family because they support me. Also, singing for friends would make me feel more comfortable."

Example: I would like to sing for my family because they always encourage me. Additionally, singing for my close friends would help me gain confidence.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but contains some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to use linking words and clearer expressions. For example, "Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relieve stress. Moreover, many enjoy singing as a favorite pastime."

Example: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and forget their worries. Furthermore, many people enjoy singing as a fun and relaxing activity.

× No, I don't like singing becauses I am not confident on my singing abilities and.

✓ No, I don't like singing because I am not confident in my singing abilities.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, the conjunction 'and' at the end is unnecessary and creates an incomplete sentence. The preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to confidence in abilities.

× I am not confident on my singing abilities and.

✓ I am not confident in my singing abilities.

The correct preposition to use with 'confident' when referring to abilities is 'in', not 'on'.

× I prefer listening to music instead of singing a song by myself.

✓ I prefer listening to music instead of singing a song myself.

The phrase 'by myself' is redundant here; 'myself' suffices to indicate doing something alone.

× No, I haven't learned how to sing 'cause I enjoyed listening to music instead of singing it to be 'cause I am not so confident on my.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I enjoy listening to music instead of singing it because I am not so confident in my singing abilities.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Enjoyed' should be 'enjoy' to match the present perfect 'haven't learned'. Also, 'to be' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The preposition 'on' should be 'in'.

× I am not so confident on my.

✓ I am not so confident in my singing abilities.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'in' is the correct preposition to use with 'confident' when referring to abilities.

× Then I'll speak, I think in in front of somebody.

✓ Then I'll speak, I think, in front of somebody.

The sentence has repeated words 'in in' and lacks proper commas to separate clauses, making it confusing. Correct punctuation and removal of repetition improve clarity.

× Many famous singers are there in Nova. World and I think that they should be given a chance.

✓ There are many famous singers in the Nova World, and I think that they should be given a chance.

The sentence structure is awkward. Using 'There are' at the beginning is the correct form to indicate existence. Also, 'Nova. World' should be 'Nova World' without a period.

× Many famous singers are there in Nova. World and I think that they should be given a chance.

✓ There are many famous singers in the Nova World, and I think that they should be given a chance.

The conjunction 'and' is correct here but the sentence needs proper punctuation and structure for clarity.

× And in my locality many people sing very nicely, so I believe that they should be also given a chance.

✓ In my locality, many people sing very nicely, so I believe that they should also be given a chance.

The placement of 'also' is incorrect; it should come before 'be given' for proper emphasis. Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and can be omitted.

× Yes Engine can bring happiness to the people because it makes them feel stress free and enjoy singing a lot of the songs and it is there for them.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it makes them feel stress-free and enjoy singing many songs; it is there for them.

'Engine' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'singing'. 'Stress free' should be hyphenated as 'stress-free'. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.

× Yes Engine can bring happiness to the people because it makes them feel stress free and enjoy singing a lot of the songs and it is there for them.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because it makes them feel stress-free and enjoy singing many songs; it is there for them.

The definite article 'the' before 'people' and 'songs' is unnecessary unless referring to specific people or songs. Removing 'the' generalizes the statement appropriately.

× It is the favorite pastime.

✓ It is a favorite pastime.

Without prior context specifying a particular pastime, 'a favorite pastime' is more appropriate than 'the favorite pastime'.