Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a hard day's work. Although I don't have much free time, singing aloud makes me feel healthier and happier.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Use a clear topic sentence and explain your experience with singing using specific details. Avoid unclear phrases and improve sentence structure.

Example: I have never formally learned how to sing, but I enjoy imitating my favorite singers by following their songs. This helps me improve my singing skills gradually.

Suggestion: Your answer is short and lacks detail. Provide a clear response and explain your choice with supporting details using linking words to make it coherent.

Example: I am not sure, but if I had to sing for someone, it would probably be my boyfriend because I want to express my feelings through music.

Suggestion: Your answer has good intent but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use clear sentences with linking words and specific examples to explain how singing brings happiness.

Example: Yes, I definitely think singing brings happiness. For example, singing beautiful songs loudly with friends or family can create joyful and memorable moments.

× I seldom have time to singing.

✓ I seldom have time to sing.

After the verb 'have time to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'to sing' is correct instead of 'to singing'.

× I think singing aloud, seeing loud will help you to be healthy.

✓ I think singing aloud, seeing aloud will help you to be healthy.

The word 'seeing' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'singing'. Also, 'singing aloud' is the correct phrase. 'Seeing loud' is not grammatically correct.

× I haven't learned how to sing, but I just copy the singer star, follow the rain and I will be very, very good at singing just following them.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing, but I just copy the singer star, follow the rhythm and I will be very, very good at singing just by following them.

The phrase 'follow the rain' is incorrect; it should be 'follow the rhythm'. Also, 'copy' is present tense and acceptable here as a habitual action. The sentence is awkward but the main grammar issue is the incorrect word 'rain' instead of 'rhythm'.

× The rain, the words is seen out.

✓ The rhythm, the words are sung out.

'Rain' is incorrect; it should be 'rhythm'. Also, 'is seen out' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'are sung out' because 'words' is plural and the verb should agree in number and tense.

× I never do thing for someone if if need to sing for someone I think should be my boyfriend.

✓ I never do things for someone. If I need to sing for someone, I think it should be my boyfriend.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× If if need to sing for someone I think should be my boyfriend.

✓ If I need to sing for someone, I think it should be my boyfriend.

The subject pronoun 'I' is missing before 'need'. Also, 'it' is needed as the subject in the second clause for clarity.

× Yes, that's definitely.

✓ Yes, definitely.

The phrase 'that's definitely' is incomplete and awkward. 'Definitely' alone is sufficient as an affirmative response.

× Well-being happiness with during your singing songs IK specially you are singing loud or is seen that beautiful songs together with your good friends or family members.

✓ Well-being and happiness during your singing, especially when you are singing loudly or singing beautiful songs together with your good friends or family members.

The original sentence misuses prepositions 'with' and 'during' together incorrectly. Also, 'singing loud' should be 'singing loudly'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× ...you are singing loud or is seen that beautiful songs...

✓ ...you are singing loudly or singing those beautiful songs...

'Singing loud' should be 'singing loudly' because 'loudly' is the adverb modifying the verb 'singing'. 'Is seen that beautiful songs' is incorrect; it should be 'singing those beautiful songs'.

× So yeah, that's definitely will be happening or happier.

✓ So yeah, that's definitely going to happen and make you happier.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'That's definitely will be happening or happier' is incorrect structure. The corrected sentence uses proper future tense and clear meaning.