Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, and avoid redundancy. Use simple and correct sentence structures, and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I like singing very much because it helps me express my feelings. Since childhood, I have enjoyed singing songs about our culture and monuments. When I was in school, I participated in singing competitions organized by the school. Singing brings me joy and confidence.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Example: Yes, I have learnt singing from my maternal uncle, who is a good singer. Whenever I visit his home, I enjoy singing with him. He appreciates my singing and encourages me to improve.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and lacks direct response to the question. Try to answer who you want to sing for, and explain your choice with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I usually sing for my family and friends because I want to share my feelings with them. I like singing songs that express emotions like love, anger, and empathy. My favourite singer is Arijit Singh from Bollywood, who inspires me a lot.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and difficult to understand. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps express emotions and relieve stress. Even if someone is not a fluent singer, singing familiar songs can make them feel relaxed and joyful.

× Yes, I love singing becauses until my birth I like to sing a song about our culture, our monuments and also when I was in school and there was.

✓ Yes, I love singing because since my birth I have liked to sing songs about our culture and our monuments, and also when I was in school.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, 'until my birth' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'since my birth' to indicate from birth until now. The sentence structure is confusing and needs to be split for clarity. 'I like' should be 'I have liked' to indicate a continuous action from past to present.

× The school organizes was organized competition and I took participate in that party.

✓ The school organized a competition and I took part in that event.

The phrase 'organizes was organized' is incorrect; the past tense 'organized' should be used. 'Took participate' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'took part'. 'Party' is not appropriate here; 'event' or 'competition' fits better.

× Yes, one of my maternal uncle. Maternal uncle whose name is. Who said War A? He's good singer and also whenever I go, go to their home.

✓ Yes, one of my maternal uncles, whose name is War A, is a good singer. Also, whenever I go to their home,

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Maternal uncle whose name is' is incomplete and needs to be connected properly. 'He's good singer' needs an article: 'a good singer'. Repetition of 'go' is incorrect.

× I love to see, I love to sing a song an he liked my concept and also he appreciated me.

✓ I love to sing songs, and he liked my concept and also appreciated me.

'I love to see' is unclear and likely incorrect in context. 'An' should be 'and'. The pronoun 'he' is used correctly but the sentence needs to be clearer and more concise.

× I have no choice to sing who do I am, but whenever I try to sing a song I used to sing song about.

✓ I have no choice about whom I sing for, but whenever I try to sing a song, I usually sing songs about...

The phrase 'who do I am' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'whom I sing for'. 'Used to sing' implies past habit; 'usually sing' is better for present habitual action.

× Low. Angriness, empathy, an so on an yes.

✓ Love, anger, empathy, and so on, yes.

'Low' is likely a typo for 'love'. 'Angriness' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'anger'. 'An' should be 'and'. The sentence needs proper punctuation and spelling.

× In Bollywood, there is a singer whose name is a rigid sing.

✓ In Bollywood, there is a singer whose name is Arijit Singh.

The name 'a rigid sing' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'Arijit Singh', a proper noun and name of a famous singer.

× Yes, I think that, uh. Singing is an emotion to. To. But do control over emotion and also lots of people try to sing but they don't sing like fluently an if certain song be so we heard we can relax our.

✓ Yes, I think that singing is an emotion. It helps to control emotions. Also, many people try to sing but they don't sing fluently. If a certain song is heard, we can relax.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Singing is an emotion to' is incomplete. 'Do control over emotion' is incorrect; it should be 'helps to control emotions'. 'Don't sing like fluently' is incorrect; 'don't sing fluently' is correct. 'If certain song be so we heard' is incorrect; it should be 'If a certain song is heard'. The sentence needs to be broken into clear, complete sentences.