Singing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“whispering with it”和“saying specially”，影响表达的自然性和准确性。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并避免重复和冗余。

Example: No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it. I enjoy listening to songs and sometimes sing quietly to myself. However, I feel shy singing in front of others because I worry they might laugh at me.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，如“why was in primary school”、“wants wanted”、“lessers”等，影响理解。建议注意时态和单词拼写，表达更清晰。

Example: Yes, I have. I took singing classes when I was in primary school because my mother wanted me to improve my singing skills. However, the lessons made me realize that I am not very talented at singing, so I gave up on becoming a singer.

Suggestion: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法和用词错误，如“while I see”、“listener to be myself only”。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复。

Example: I'm not good at singing, so I usually sing only for myself. Sometimes, when I'm in a bad mood, I play music and sing along to feel better.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误严重，如“Definitely an my favorite singer is done she she”、“through home saying”等，影响理解。建议分开表达观点和举例，注意语法和拼写。

Example: Definitely. My favorite singer is Denise Ho, who is very famous in Hong Kong, China. Listening to her singing always makes me feel happy, so I believe singing brings happiness to people.

× I like listening to songs and whispering with it, but I don't like saying specially in front of others because I feel little bit shy and I always think that others may make fun of me.

✓ I like listening to songs and whispering with them, but I don't like singing especially in front of others because I feel a little bit shy and I always think that others may make fun of me.

这里'saying'用错了，应该用'singing'表示唱歌。'Saying'是说话，'singing'是唱歌。还有'whispering with it'中的'it'指代不明确，应该用复数'them'指代'songs'。此外，'specially'应改为'adverb'形式'especially'。

× I took singing classes why was in primary school because my mother wants wanted me to improve my singing skills.

✓ I took singing classes when I was in primary school because my mother wanted me to improve my singing skills.

'why'应为'when'表示时间。'wants'应为过去式'wanted'，因为句子描述过去的事情。

× However the lessers made me realize that that's I'm not so talented in singing and ever since then I give up the sort of becoming a thing.

✓ However, the lessons made me realize that I'm not so talented in singing, and ever since then I gave up the idea of becoming a singer.

'lessers'应为'lessons'。'that's I'm'结构错误，应为'that I'm'。'give up'应使用过去式'gave up'，因为是过去发生的事。'the sort of becoming a thing'表达不清，应改为'the idea of becoming a singer'。

× Uhm, I'm not good at singing so while I see I only want the listener to be myself only and sometimes when I'm in a bad mood I would play some music and sing along with it.

✓ Uhm, I'm not good at singing so I only want the listener to be myself, and sometimes when I'm in a bad mood I play some music and sing along with it.

'while I see'用法错误，应去掉。'listener to be myself only'中'only'重复且位置不当，去掉一个。'would play'改为一般现在时'play'更符合习惯表达。

× Definitely an my favorite singer is done she she is a very famous singer from Hong Kong, China and through home saying I always feel delighted and I'm sure saying brings happiness to people.

✓ Definitely, my favorite singer is Denise Ho. She is a very famous singer from Hong Kong, China, and through her singing I always feel delighted. I'm sure singing brings happiness to people.

'an my'应为'my'。'done she she'应为'Denise Ho. She'。'through home saying'应为'through her singing'。'saying'应为'singing'。